Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho câu trả lời khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. Especially in families with children, it allows me to multitask and manage household chores more efficiently.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời có tính liên kết cao hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Both washing machines and sweeping machines play an important role in my daily life because I have a lot of household chores. They help me save time and effort since they are reliable, efficient, and very convenient.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng cần chú ý cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời chính xác hơn. Bạn nên dùng từ phù hợp hơn thay vì 'instructions playbook' và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I don't really enjoy reading instruction manuals. Instead, I usually search on Google or watch tutorial videos on YouTube because I find them easier and more effective for learning how to use a machine.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời với cấu trúc đầy đủ và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác như 'manual instruction is'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because there are many different types of devices on the market. Sometimes, watching tutorial videos on YouTube or searching on Google doesn't provide enough information, so reading the manual is necessary.

× I would say washing machine is my favorite device at home is have me saved a tremendous amount of time and effort particularly with fam family in families with children's is how is allowed me to do multitask.

✓ I would say the washing machine is my favorite device at home because it has saved me a tremendous amount of time and effort, particularly for families with children. It has allowed me to multitask.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'washing machine' missing 'the', 'families with children's' should be 'families with children', and verb agreement errors like 'is have me saved' instead of 'it has saved me'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I would say washing machine is my favorite device at home is have me saved a tremendous amount of time and effort particularly with fam family in families with children's is how is allowed me to do multitask.

✓ I would say the washing machine is my favorite device at home because it has saved me a tremendous amount of time and effort, particularly for families with children. It has allowed me to multitask.

The phrase 'have me saved' is incorrect; the correct past participle form 'has saved' should be used with the auxiliary verb 'has' to form the present perfect tense.

× Both of them are play an important role in my daily life because I have a lot of housework household scores to do and it's have me save a lot of time and effort.

✓ Both of them play an important role in my daily life because I have a lot of household chores to do and they have helped me save a lot of time and effort.

'Are play' is incorrect; it should be 'play' to agree with plural subject. 'Household scores' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'household chores'. 'It's have me save' is incorrect; it should be 'they have helped me save' to match plural subject and correct verb form.

× It's it's reliant, efficient and more convenience.

✓ They are reliable, efficient, and more convenient.

'It's it's reliant' is incorrect; 'reliant' is an adjective but 'reliable' fits better here. 'More convenience' is incorrect; the adjective form 'convenient' should be used. Also, 'It's' should be 'They are' to refer to plural machines.

× I don't really enjoy watching instructions, especially reading instructions playbook.

✓ I don't really enjoy reading instructions, especially instruction manuals.

'Watching instructions' is incorrect because instructions are read, not watched. 'Reading instructions playbook' is awkward; 'instruction manuals' is the correct term.

× Instead of that I would go to Google search for using it or go to YouTube to watch the video.

✓ Instead, I would search on Google for how to use it or go to YouTube to watch a video.

'Instead of that' is awkward; 'Instead' is better. 'Google search for using it' is incorrect; 'search on Google for how to use it' is correct. 'Watch the video' should be 'watch a video' as it is general.

× I think it's much better and much easier to learn how.

✓ I think it's much better and much easier to learn how to use it.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'learn how'; it needs an object or phrase like 'to use it' to be complete and clear.

× there are many different types of devices on the market. Uh, sometime watching tutorial videos on YouTube or such on Google doesn't work, so reading manual instruction is.

✓ There are many different types of devices on the market. Sometimes watching tutorial videos on YouTube or searching on Google doesn't work, so reading the manual instructions is necessary.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' for frequency. 'Reading manual instruction is' is incomplete; it should be 'reading the manual instructions is necessary'. Also, 'manual instruction' should be plural 'manual instructions'.