Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to sound more natural and confident.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because I live in southern China where the weather is very hot. Even in winter, it helps keep the temperature comfortable, making it essential for my daily life.

Sugerencia: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'since' to connect ideas. Try to reduce hesitation sounds and improve sentence variety.

Ejemplo: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save me time and energy. Since I am often tired after work, these machines help me complete housework quickly and easily.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but could be clearer and more fluent. Avoid repetition and use linking words to organise your ideas. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary instead of vague phrases like 'like A to swipe the floor'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions first when I buy a new machine. For example, I carefully follow the steps to set up a floor-sweeping machine to ensure it works properly.

Sugerencia: Try to give a clear and structured answer with linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Avoid filler words and be more specific about why reading instructions is important.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because it helps prevent damage to the machine on the first day. By following the instructions carefully, I can avoid mistakes and ensure the machine works effectively.

× we need air conditioner

✓ we need an air conditioner

The noun 'air conditioner' is singular and countable, so it requires an article 'an' before it to be grammatically correct.

× washing machine and sweeping machine definitely help a lot in my life

✓ washing machines and sweeping machines definitely help a lot in my life

When referring to machines in general, the plural form 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' should be used to indicate more than one or the category as a whole.

× I'm very tiring to do housework like this

✓ I'm very tired to do housework like this

The adjective 'tiring' describes something that causes tiredness, while 'tired' describes the state of feeling fatigue. Here, the speaker is describing their own state, so 'tired' is correct.

× the first step I'll do is to reach the instructions

✓ the first step I'll do is to read the instructions

The verb 'reach' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'read' when referring to looking at written instructions.

× to set up a a machine like A to swipe the floor

✓ to set up a machine like A to sweep the floor

The verb 'swipe' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'sweep' when referring to cleaning the floor with a machine.

× you don't want to break your stuff at the first day you put it in

✓ you don't want to break your stuff on the first day you put it in

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'the first day'; the correct preposition is 'on' to indicate a specific day.

× to avoid any mistake I might do

✓ to avoid any mistakes I might make

The phrase 'mistake I might do' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'mistakes I might make' because 'make a mistake' is the proper expression.