Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，且表达不完整。建议回答时注意句子结构，避免语法错误，并且回答要完整，清晰表达观点。

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is my computer because it helps me learn new things online. I often watch educational videos and use it for studying, so it plays an important role in my daily life.

Sugerencia: 回答句子不完整，语法错误明显，表达不流畅。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并且用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us finish a lot of housework quickly. As a result, we have more spare time to do things we enjoy.

Sugerencia: 回答表达不完整，最后一句话没有说完。建议回答时注意完整表达观点，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I find them boring and hard to understand. Instead, I prefer watching tutorial videos which are easier to follow.

Sugerencia: 回答前后矛盾，表达混乱，语法错误多。建议先明确观点，然后用具体理由支持，避免自相矛盾。

Ejemplo: I think it is important to read instructions carefully because they help us use machines correctly. However, sometimes the instructions are too long and hard to understand, like the washing machine manual, which can be frustrating.

× My favorite machine at home is my computer as it helps me learn a lot of new things from the Internet is play an important role in my daily life.

✓ My favorite machine at home is my computer because it helps me learn a lot of new things from the Internet and plays an important role in my daily life.

原句结构混乱，缺少连接词，导致句子不完整。应使用连词“because”和“and”连接两个分句，使句子通顺完整。

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machines are important because.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because.

“washing machine”应使用复数形式“washing machines”，与后面的“sweeping machines”保持一致。

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machines are important because.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help us.

句子因缺少原因部分而不完整，应补充完整的原因从句。

× It's help us.

✓ They help us.

“It's”是“it is”的缩写，主语与谓语不一致，应改为复数主语“they”与动词“help”搭配。

× Too many housework.

✓ Too much housework.

“housework”是不可数名词，不能用“many”，应使用“much”。

× We have more spare time to do things we like.

✓ We have more spare time to do the things we like.

在表达特定的事物时，应使用定冠词“the”。

× I usually don't like reading instruction before using a machine because I find them boring and difficult to understand.

✓ I usually don't like reading instructions before using a machine because I find them boring and difficult to understand.

“instruction”应使用复数形式“instructions”，因为指的是多条说明。

× They often give me a video which.

✓ They often give me a video.

句子末尾“which”无后续内容，导致句子不完整，应去掉“which”。

× It is not important to read the instruction carefully because sometimes they are difficult in understanding, for example the washing machine instruction as seen as a book.

✓ It is not important to read the instructions carefully because sometimes they are difficult to understand, for example, the washing machine instructions look like a book.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“difficult in understanding”应改为“difficult to understand”；“as seen as a book”表达不当，应改为“look like a book”。