Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve grammar, for example, say "My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because I use it daily to clean my clothes, which makes me feel comfortable."

Ejemplo: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because I use it every day to clean my clothes, which helps me stay comfortable and saves time.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some vocabulary and grammar errors. Use correct terms like "sweeping machines" instead of "stripping machines" and "clothing quality" instead of "closing quality." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important. Especially for me, the washing machine is the most important because it improves the quality of my clothes and saves me time.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. For example, "To be honest, I usually don't read instructions because I prefer to ask my friends or family. I always try to find an easy way to learn."

Ejemplo: To be honest, I usually don't read instructions because I prefer to ask my friends or family. I always try to find an easy way to learn how to use new machines.

Sugerencia: Your answer is positive but could be more natural and grammatically correct. For example, say "Yes, I believe it is very important to read instructions. I hope to always read them in the future to have a better experience using new devices."

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe it is very important to read instructions. I hope to always read them in the future to have a better experience using new devices.

× My favorite machine in my home is laundry machine because every day I need to clean my clothings and it can help me to make me comfort and make it clean so I'm using it every day.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the laundry machine because every day I need to clean my clothes and it can help me feel comfortable and make them clean, so I use it every day.

The word 'laundry machine' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine in the home. 'Clothings' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'clothes'. The phrase 'make me comfort' is incorrect; it should be 'help me feel comfortable'. Also, 'make it clean' should refer to 'them' (clothes) and 'I'm using it every day' should be 'I use it every day' to match the habitual action.

× Yeah, I think washing machines and stripping machines are important. Especially for me, washing machines is most important because it can increase my closing quality and it can save my time.

✓ Yeah, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important. Especially for me, the washing machine is the most important because it can improve the quality of my clothes and save me time.

The word 'stripping machines' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sweeping machines'. 'Washing machines is' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'the washing machine is' because it refers to a singular item. 'Closing quality' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'clothes quality' or better 'the quality of my clothes'. Also, 'it can save my time' is better expressed as 'save me time'.

× To be honest, I'm not reading instructions because I can ask about instruction to my friend, to my family and etcetera. Is a typical human in the world. I always trying to find some easy way to learn something.

✓ To be honest, I don't read instructions because I can ask my friends or family about them. It's typical for people in the world. I am always trying to find an easy way to learn something.

'I'm not reading instructions' is incorrect for habitual action; it should be 'I don't read instructions'. 'Ask about instruction to my friend' is incorrect preposition and article usage; it should be 'ask my friends or family about them'. 'Is a typical human in the world' lacks a subject; it should be 'It's typical for people in the world'. 'I always trying' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous tense.

× Yes, absolutely it's most important to read instructions and I have hope that I always try to read instructions in my future for my better experience to using something.

✓ Yes, absolutely, it's very important to read instructions and I hope that I will always try to read instructions in the future for a better experience using things.

'I have hope' is awkward; 'I hope' is correct. 'I always try to read instructions in my future' should be 'I will always try to read instructions in the future' to express future intention. 'For my better experience to using something' is incorrect; it should be 'for a better experience using things' or 'for a better experience when using something'.