Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明原因，保持语言流畅自然。

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner. It helps me keep my room comfortable because I don't like feeling too hot or cold. Also, since I live in Zhuhai, which is very humid, the air conditioner helps reduce the moisture in the air.

Sugerencia: 回答中有词汇使用错误（如fatal应为useful或important），句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议先明确表达观点，然后用具体理由支持，避免语法错误和不恰当的词汇。

Ejemplo: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important for me because I prefer to save time for my work instead of doing chores. However, some people, like house workers, may not rely on these machines as much since cleaning is their job.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: Sometimes I don't read instructions if the machine is common and easy to use. But if the machine is complicated, I always read the instructions carefully to understand how it works.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够连贯，有语法和用词错误。建议先明确回答，再用具体例子支持观点，注意句子结构和逻辑连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is important to read instructions. For example, once I didn't read the instructions and poured hot water into a bowl, which caused it to be damaged. Reading instructions can help avoid such problems.

× It will definitely be the air conditions as I'm a pupil who is neither perform cold nor hot so the air condition help me to keep my room in a comfortable temperature and also because I live in Zhuhai which is very wet so the air condition help me too.

✓ It will definitely be the air conditioner as I'm a pupil who is neither cold nor hot, so the air conditioner helps me to keep my room at a comfortable temperature, and also because I live in Zhuhai which is very wet, so the air conditioner helps me too.

这里“air conditions”和“air condition”使用错误，正确应为单数“air conditioner”，表示空调设备。动词“help”应与单数主语“air conditioner”保持一致，改为“helps”。此外，“perform cold nor hot”表达不正确，应改为“neither cold nor hot”。

× It will definitely be the air conditions as I'm a pupil who is neither perform cold nor hot so the air condition help me to keep my room in a comfortable temperature and also because I live in Zhuhai which is very wet so the air condition help me too.

✓ It will definitely be the air conditioner as I'm a pupil who is neither cold nor hot, so the air conditioner helps me to keep my room at a comfortable temperature, and also because I live in Zhuhai which is very wet, so the air conditioner helps me too.

“perform cold nor hot”中“perform”用法错误，应直接用形容词“cold”与“hot”表示状态。

× It will definitely be the air conditions as I'm a pupil who is neither perform cold nor hot so the air condition help me to keep my room in a comfortable temperature and also because I live in Zhuhai which is very wet so the air condition help me too.

✓ It will definitely be the air conditioner as I'm a pupil who is neither cold nor hot, so the air conditioner helps me to keep my room at a comfortable temperature, and also because I live in Zhuhai which is very wet, so the air conditioner helps me too.

主语“air conditioner”为单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”，而非“help”。

× It depends. For me it is very fatal things because I'm a lazy person.

✓ It depends. For me, they are very useful things because I'm a lazy person.

“fatal things”用词不当，意为“致命的东西”，应改为“useful things”（有用的东西）更符合语境。

× I don't want to waste my time to wash my clothes by hand and wiping the floor.

✓ I don't want to waste my time washing my clothes by hand and wiping the floor.

“waste time”后应接动名词形式，故“to wash”应改为“washing”。

× But some people, like some house workers, I think it is their job, so they don't need to lie on these machines.

✓ But some people, like some house workers, I think it is their job, so they don't need to rely on these machines.

“lie on”用法错误，应为“rely on”，表示依赖。

× Well, sometimes, usually when I use some machine that is common to see in my daily life, I will just try to use it.

✓ Well, sometimes, usually when I use some machines that are common to see in my daily life, I will just try to use them.

“some machine”应为复数“some machines”，且后文代词应与复数保持一致，改为“them”。

× I smile, but if some sophisticated I will try to read the instruction and find how does this work and if there is something.

✓ I smile, but if it is sophisticated, I will try to read the instructions and find out how it works and if there is something important.

“some sophisticated”缺少名词，应为“if it is sophisticated”。“instruction”应为复数“instructions”。“find how does this work”语序错误，应为“find out how it works”。

× Actually it is, uh, there's a thing. That's why I use my photos.

✓ Actually it is, uh, there's a thing. That's why I use my phone.

“photos”与语境不符，应为“phone”（手机）。

× I didn't see the instructions and I poured the hot water into the bowl and it has been damaged.

✓ I didn't see the instructions and I poured hot water into the bowl and it was damaged.

“has been damaged”时态不合，应与前文过去时保持一致，改为“was damaged”。

× So sometimes watching the instruction help you to avoid some problem and some damage.

✓ So sometimes watching the instructions helps you to avoid some problems and some damage.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，动词“help”应与主语“watching the instructions”保持一致，改为“helps”。“problem”应为复数“problems”。