Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. Try to make your sentences complete and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the electric fan because it helps me stay cool during the hot summer season. Since the temperature is very high, the fan makes me feel comfortable and less irritated.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, provide reasons to support your opinion with linking words.

Ejemplo: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort. However, some people prefer to do these tasks by hand for better control and to stay active.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because they help me understand how to operate the tools properly and systematically. This ensures I use them safely and effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys the idea but needs clearer sentence structure and grammar. Try to make your sentences more natural and use linking words to connect your points.

Ejemplo: I believe it is important to read instructions because they help people follow correct procedures. This way, we can complete our tasks more effectively and avoid mistakes.

× Nowadays one of my favorite machine in my home is electronic fan because it is summer season and.

✓ Nowadays one of my favorite machines in my home is an electric fan because it is summer season.

The word 'machine' should be plural 'machines' because it follows 'one of my favorite', which requires a plural noun. Also, 'electronic fan' is better expressed as 'electric fan'.

× Nowadays one of my favorite machine in my home is electronic fan because it is summer season and.

✓ Nowadays one of my favorite machines in my home is an electric fan because it is summer season.

The phrase 'electronic fan' needs the indefinite article 'an' before it because it is a singular countable noun being introduced for the first time.

× Nowadays one of my favorite machine in my home is electronic fan because it is summer season and.

✓ Nowadays one of my favorite machines in my home is an electric fan because it is summer season.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete and causes sentence structure error. The sentence should end properly without 'and'.

× I do not think washing machines and sweeping machines are a very important on our daily basis because there are innovative ways us in us like we can do it by ourselves, by our hands doing by hands with thin.

✓ I do not think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important on our daily basis because there are innovative ways for us, like we can do it by ourselves, by our hands.

The phrase 'a very important' is incorrect because 'important' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'ways us in us' is incorrect and should be 'ways for us'.

× I do not think washing machines and sweeping machines are a very important on our daily basis because there are innovative ways us in us like we can do it by ourselves, by our hands doing by hands with thin.

✓ I do not think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important on our daily basis because there are innovative ways for us, like we can do it by ourselves, by our hands.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used in 'ways us in us'. The correct preposition is 'for' as in 'ways for us'.

× I do not think washing machines and sweeping machines are a very important on our daily basis because there are innovative ways us in us like we can do it by ourselves, by our hands doing by hands with thin.

✓ I do not think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important on our daily basis because there are innovative ways for us, like we can do it by ourselves, by our hands.

The sentence is confusing and contains redundant phrases like 'doing by hands with thin'. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and structure.

× Yes, I do read the instructions before using any kind of the machines because it helps me how to use that tools properly in a systematic way and also provides the proper guide to us.

✓ Yes, I do read the instructions before using any kind of machine because it helps me understand how to use those tools properly in a systematic way and also provides proper guidance to us.

The phrase 'any kind of the machines' is incorrect; 'any kind of machine' is correct because 'kind of' is followed by singular noun without 'the'. Also, 'that tools' should be 'those tools' to match plural form.

× Yes, I do read the instructions before using any kind of the machines because it helps me how to use that tools properly in a systematic way and also provides the proper guide to us.

✓ Yes, I do read the instructions before using any kind of machine because it helps me understand how to use those tools properly in a systematic way and also provides proper guidance to us.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrect for plural 'tools'; it should be 'those' to refer to plural objects.

× Yes, I do read the instructions before using any kind of the machines because it helps me how to use that tools properly in a systematic way and also provides the proper guide to us.

✓ Yes, I do read the instructions before using any kind of machine because it helps me understand how to use those tools properly in a systematic way and also provides proper guidance to us.

The phrase 'proper guide' is better expressed as 'proper guidance' because 'guidance' is an uncountable noun and fits better in this context.

× I believe that reading instructions, people using anything should be very good so that we can follow the good procedures and similarly it helps to do our work more effectively.

✓ I believe that people using anything should read instructions carefully so that we can follow good procedures and it helps us do our work more effectively.

The phrase 'reading instructions, people using anything should be very good' is awkward and incorrect. It should be rephrased for clarity and correctness. Also, 'the good procedures' should be 'good procedures' without 'the'.