Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use clearer and more accurate vocabulary, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, specify the machine clearly and explain its benefits in a logical way.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine for my baby's bottles. It helps us stay organized and saves a lot of time because we don't have to wash each bottle by hand, which also frees up space in the kitchen.

Sugerencia: Focus on completing your sentences clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Provide specific reasons why these machines are important.

Ejemplo: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important nowadays because they save time and effort. For example, while the washing machine cleans clothes, we can do other tasks, and sweeping machines clean more efficiently than manual sweeping.

Sugerencia: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Explain your reasons clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it seems complicated. However, if I have used the machine before and know how it works, I might skip reading the instructions. Reading instructions helps prevent damage and ensures proper use.

Sugerencia: Make sure your answer is clear and complete, with correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Explain why reading instructions is important with specific reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine. If you don't, the machine might get damaged and you could lose the warranty. Also, reading instructions saves time by showing the proper way to use the machine. However, some simple machines may not require instructions.

× Frankly speaking, my favorite mission in my home is the washer and gyro my baby bottles.

✓ Frankly speaking, my favorite machine in my home is the washer that cleans my baby bottles.

The word 'mission' is incorrect here; it should be 'machine'. Also, 'gyro' is likely a mishearing or typo; the intended meaning is 'that cleans' or 'which washes' my baby bottles. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So it keep us small organized and it saves a lot of time and afford the need to wash out all the bottles and the space so.

✓ So it keeps us small and organized, and it saves a lot of time and effort by eliminating the need to wash all the bottles by hand, saving space as well.

The pronoun 'it' requires the verb 'keeps' in third person singular. 'Afford the need' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'eliminating the need'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× Yes, nowadays it's very important to keep these two machines because of automations.

✓ Yes, nowadays it's very important to have these two machines because of automation.

The phrase 'keep these two machines' is awkward; 'have' is more appropriate. 'Automations' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'automation'.

× It will save a lot of time when we put all the for washing, we can do some other jobs and the sweeping machines which will help will which will which will be more efficient when cleaning other than sweeping manually.

✓ They save a lot of time because when we put everything in for washing, we can do other jobs. Sweeping machines help and are more efficient than sweeping manually.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Correcting sentence structure and removing repeated phrases improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I always read instructions before using emission.

✓ Yes, I always read instructions before using a machine.

The word 'emission' is incorrect; the intended word is 'machine'. Also, 'instructions' should be preceded by an article 'the' or 'instructions' can stand alone if general.

× So it basically depends if there is any.

✓ So it basically depends if there are any.

The subject 'instructions' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× If the machine is very kind, seems very complicated, we need to read the missions before using it, otherwise it might go quality.

✓ If the machine is very kind of complicated, we need to read the instructions before using it; otherwise, it might malfunction.

The phrase 'very kind' is incorrect here; likely intended 'kind of'. 'Missions' should be 'instructions'. 'Go quality' is incorrect; 'malfunction' or 'break down' is appropriate.

× So, but some of the missions I don't read it because we are aware of how how to use it because we previously owned that mission.

✓ But for some machines, I don't read the instructions because we are aware of how to use them since we previously owned those machines.

'Missions' should be 'machines'. Pronouns must agree in number: 'it' changed to 'them' for plural 'machines'. Repetition of 'how' removed.

× So it's better to read a instructions.

✓ So it's better to read the instructions.

'Instructions' is plural, so the article 'a' is incorrect; 'the' is appropriate here.

× As it is very important to read the instructions before using a mission.

✓ It is very important to read the instructions before using a machine.

'Mission' should be 'machine'. The phrase 'As it is' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× If you don't do it, the machine can go 40 and we won't be able to claim the warranty.

✓ If you don't do it, the machine can break down and we won't be able to claim the warranty.

'Go 40' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'break down' meaning the machine stops working.

× So and also it also saves the time and proper way of using that mission.

✓ Also, it saves time and ensures the proper use of that machine.

'Saves the time' is incorrect; 'saves time' is correct. 'Proper way of using that mission' is awkward; 'ensures the proper use of that machine' is clearer.

× So also sometimes some machines don't need an instrument.

✓ Also, sometimes some machines don't need instructions.

'Instrument' is incorrect; the intended word is 'instructions'.