Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat effective but a bit redundant and lacks coherence. Instead of listing two machines without linking them properly, focus on one favourite machine and explain why clearly using linking words. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'I would say'.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort when cleaning clothes. Additionally, it helps keep my clothes fresh and clean without much hassle.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to make your point more coherent. Also, avoid repetition and ensure subject-verb agreement.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they reduce conflicts in families by sharing the responsibility of household chores more fairly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains several language errors, such as 'solve it in a with my dis instinct'. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Also, avoid repetition and keep your answer concise.

Ejemplo: I don't usually read the instructions before using a machine because I prefer to figure it out myself. However, this sometimes causes problems, and I have accidentally damaged machines before.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, avoid repeating words like 'to to' and ensure correct verb forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it's important to read the instructions because they explain how to use the machine properly, which helps prevent mistakes and damage.

× I often solve it in a with my dis instinct.

✓ I often solve it with my instinct.

The phrase 'in a with my dis instinct' is incorrect due to improper preposition and article usage. The correct phrase is 'with my instinct' because 'solve' is typically followed by 'with' to indicate the means or method. Also, 'dis' seems to be a typo and should be removed.

× people wouldn't like argue about who to who should be responsible for doing that house chores.

✓ people wouldn't like to argue about who should be responsible for doing the house chores.

The phrase 'who to who should be responsible' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'who should be responsible'. Also, 'that house chores' is incorrect; 'house chores' is plural and should be preceded by 'the' not 'that'. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× it will be better to to check it before actually make use of it.

✓ it will be better to check it before actually making use of it.

The phrase 'before actually make use of it' is incorrect because after 'before' a gerund (-ing form) is required. Therefore, 'make' should be changed to 'making'. Also, the repeated 'to' is a typographical error and should be removed.