Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and has some grammatical errors. Try to separate ideas clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, say "My favorite machine at home is my TV because I can watch various series and movies on it."

Ejemplo: My favorite machine at home is my TV because I can watch various series and movies on it, which helps me relax after a long day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, "Yes, I think washing machines are important because they save time compared to washing clothes by hand. Similarly, sweeping machines help keep the house clean efficiently."

Ejemplo: Yes, I think washing machines are important because they save time compared to washing clothes by hand. Similarly, sweeping machines help keep the house clean efficiently, which is very helpful for busy people.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words. For example, "It depends on the person; if someone already knows how to use the machine, they may not read the instructions. However, for high-tech devices, it is necessary to read the instructions because they are complicated."

Ejemplo: It depends on the person; if someone already knows how to use the machine, they may not read the instructions. However, for high-tech devices, it is necessary to read the instructions because they are complicated and require careful handling.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows understanding but is repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating words and give a clear, structured answer. For example, "Yes, it is important to read instructions because they explain how the machine works and how to use it safely and effectively."

Ejemplo: Yes, it is important to read instructions because they explain how the machine works and how to use it safely and effectively, which helps prevent damage and accidents.

× My favorite machine in my home is my TVI can watch any series, any movies, any web series, webs, everything I want.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is my TV. I can watch any series, any movie, any web series, everything I want.

The word 'movies' is plural but should be singular 'movie' to match the structure 'any movie'. Also, 'webs' is incorrect; it should be omitted or replaced with 'web series'. The sentence also lacks a period after 'TV'.

× Yes, I think washing machines are important because we can wash our clothes with washing machine in a short time instead of using our hand and sweeping machine also important in a particular reason.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines are important because we can wash our clothes with a washing machine in a short time instead of using our hands, and sweeping machines are also important for particular reasons.

The phrase 'with washing machine' needs an article 'a' before 'washing machine'. 'Hand' should be plural 'hands' because we use both hands. 'Sweeping machine also important' lacks a verb and should be 'sweeping machines are also important'. 'In a particular reason' is incorrect; it should be 'for particular reasons'.

× It depend on ourselves if we know the instruction about the machine before and sometimes in a very high tech device we have to learn or read about the instruction because a high tech device are very very hard to learn know about.

✓ It depends on ourselves if we know the instructions about the machine beforehand, and sometimes with a very high-tech device, we have to learn or read the instructions because a high-tech device is very hard to understand.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the subject. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Before' should be 'beforehand' for clarity. 'A high tech device are' is incorrect; it should be 'a high-tech device is'. The phrase 'hard to learn know about' is awkward and corrected to 'hard to understand'.

× By reading instruction we can clearly know how the machine works.

✓ By reading instructions, we can clearly know how the machine works.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, a comma is added after 'instructions' for clarity.