Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of saying 'most of the movies I watch in fully HD are of great experience for me,' you could say 'watching movies in full HD provides me with an excellent viewing experience.' Also, try to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and use linking words to make it more coherent.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is my LED TV because it keeps me entertained. I enjoy watching movies and shows on it, especially in full HD, which offers a great viewing experience. Additionally, it helps me relax after a long day.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has some repetition and could be more precise. Avoid repeating words like 'because because.' Also, try to organise your ideas logically using linking words such as 'therefore' or 'in addition.' For example, explain why these machines are important and how they help people save time or effort.

Ejemplo: Yes, washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and reduce physical effort. Therefore, many people prefer using these machines to manage household chores efficiently. In addition, dishwashing machines are useful since people often have limited time to wash dishes manually.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it can be improved by avoiding vague phrases like 'using a mobile phone is very OK.' Instead, provide a clearer example and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to vary your vocabulary to make your answer more engaging.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because they help me operate it correctly and safely. Even if I am familiar with the device, reading the manual ensures I do not miss any important details. For instance, smartphones often have features that require understanding the instructions to use them effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is on topic but could be more concise and better structured. Avoid repeating similar ideas like 'so people try to read instructions' and 'so they try to avoid mistakes.' Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to connect your points logically. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary, for example, 'malfunction' instead of 'faulty.'

Ejemplo: Yes, reading instructions is important for all machinery because it helps users understand how to operate devices properly. For example, touchscreen phones can be complicated, so reading the manual prevents misuse and potential malfunctions. Therefore, following instructions helps avoid mistakes and prolongs the device's lifespan.

× For example, most of the movies I watch in fully HD are of great experience for me.

✓ For example, most of the movies I watch in full HD are a great experience for me.

The phrase 'fully HD' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'full HD' to describe the quality of the movies. Also, 'are of great experience' is awkward; it should be 'are a great experience' to correctly express the idea.

× Even dish washing machines are important because people don't have enough time to wash their dishes.

✓ Even dishwashing machines are important because people don't have enough time to wash their dishes.

The term 'dish washing machines' should be combined into one word 'dishwashing machines' as it is a compound noun. This is a common usage in English.

× Even though you are familiar with the machine, you must read instructions before using it.

✓ Even though you are familiar with the machine, you must read the instructions before using it.

The word 'instructions' here is specific and known, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× For example, people use phone and most of the time touch screen phones can be very complicated.

✓ For example, people use phones and most of the time touchscreen phones can be very complicated.

The word 'phone' should be plural 'phones' to match the context. Also, 'touch screen' should be combined into one word 'touchscreen' as it is a compound adjective.

× So people try to read instructions so that they cannot make the machine faulty later on.

✓ So people try to read the instructions so that they do not make the machine faulty later on.

The phrase 'cannot make the machine faulty' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'do not make the machine faulty' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'instructions' should have the definite article 'the'.