Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is my car because it helps me travel comfortably. Moreover, I have many fond memories associated with it, such as road trips with my family.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence, then explain why these machines are important with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. They help keep our homes clean and save a lot of time and effort in daily chores.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good points but lacks clarity and fluency. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid repetition and be more concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because they provide important information about its features and accessories. This helps me operate the machine correctly and safely.

Sugerencia: Your answer repeats ideas and has incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear opinion followed by specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because it provides detailed information about how the machine works. If we don't read them, we might misuse the machine or damage it.

× My favorite There are lot of machines in my house but my favorite machine is my car because I love I love my car the most and I have many memories with my car.

✓ There are a lot of machines in my house but my favorite machine is my car because I love my car the most and I have many memories with my car.

The sentence incorrectly combines 'My favorite' with 'There are lot of machines'. The correct structure is to start with 'There are a lot of machines' to indicate existence. Also, 'lot' needs an article 'a' before it. This correction clarifies the sentence and fixes the 'There be' issue.

× Yes, I think these machines are important because it has a primary role in our house because because it is to maintain our cleaner C number house are washing machines are very useful to make our clothes clean and sewing machines are necessary for the total craziness over her.

✓ Yes, I think these machines are important because they have a primary role in our house to maintain cleanliness. Washing machines are very useful to make our clothes clean and sewing machines are necessary for total care of our clothes.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it has' referring to 'these machines' which is plural, so 'they have' is correct. Also, the sentence has unclear parts and plural/singular mismatches. Correcting these improves subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Basically I read instructions before the user machine.

✓ Basically, I read instructions before using the machine.

The phrase 'before the user machine' is incorrect. The verb 'use' should be in the '-ing' form 'using' after 'before' to indicate the action. This fixes the verb form error.

× Because it elaborates about the machine and gives them accessory details which we don't know about the machine.

✓ Because it explains the machine and gives us accessory details which we don't know about the machine.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used to refer to 'us'. The correct pronoun is 'us' as the receiver of the details. Also, 'elaborates about' is better replaced with 'explains' for clarity.

× So it helps us to us.

✓ So it helps us.

The phrase 'helps us to us' is redundant and incorrect. The correct phrase is simply 'helps us'.

× So we can operate the machines very well by the given given instructions and by following them.

✓ So we can operate the machines very well by following the given instructions.

The phrase 'by the given given instructions and by following them' is redundant and awkward. Simplifying to 'by following the given instructions' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, definitely it is important to read the instructions at.

✓ Yes, definitely it is important to read the instructions.

The word 'at' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing it corrects the sentence.

× It keeps and elaborates the proper information about the machine.

✓ It provides and explains the proper information about the machine.

The phrase 'keeps and elaborates' is incorrect. 'Keeps' is not appropriate here. Using 'provides and explains' better conveys the intended meaning.

× And. If we read the instructions properly. It it gives it gives the overall view of the all mechanism of the machine.

✓ If we read the instructions properly, it gives an overall view of the entire mechanism of the machine.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('It it gives it gives'). Combining into one sentence and correcting redundancy improves clarity and grammar.

× And if we don't want it and if we don't want it, read the instructions.

✓ And if we don't want to read the instructions, ...

The sentence is incomplete and repetitive. The phrase 'if we don't want it and if we don't want it, read the instructions' is incorrect. It should be 'if we don't want to read the instructions' to express the intended meaning.