Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích máy rửa chén, ví dụ như tiết kiệm thời gian, nước và năng lượng.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time and effort. Moreover, it helps conserve water and energy compared to washing dishes by hand.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện cách sử dụng từ vựng và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và các liên từ để kết nối ý. Ngoài ra, nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "stupid machines" và thay bằng từ phù hợp như "sweeping machines" hoặc "vacuum cleaners".

Ejemplo: I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort, especially for busy people who don't have much free time to do household chores manually.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích lý do với các chi tiết cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Ejemplo: I usually don't read instructions before using a machine because I find it time-consuming. However, when I was a child, I used to read them carefully to avoid mistakes.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để kết nối các ý. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ quan điểm của bạn.

Ejemplo: I don't think it's always necessary to read instructions because many machines are easy to use. However, for complicated devices, I believe reading the instructions is important to avoid mistakes.

× What my friend machine in my home is the dishwasher and because I'm really lazy and it was access to know which I can.

✓ My favourite machine in my home is the dishwasher because I'm really lazy and it is easy to use.

The original sentence uses 'was access to know' which is incorrect. The correct past participle form 'accessed' is not appropriate here; instead, 'easy to use' conveys the intended meaning. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× Put a dish in the dishwasher and into other thing which is saved up water.

✓ I can put dishes in the dishwasher, which also saves water.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure and verb agreement improve clarity and meaning.

× And yes it can be saved energy too.

✓ And yes, it can save energy too.

The phrase 'can be saved energy' incorrectly uses the passive form. The correct active form is 'can save energy'.

× Well, I think the washing machines and stupid machines are really important as it was distance so 4 nowadays which people are quite often lazy Ann.

✓ Well, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are really important nowadays because people are often quite lazy.

Incorrect plural forms and unclear words ('stupid machines', 'distance so 4') are corrected. 'Sweeping machines' replaces 'stupid machines' as likely intended. Sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Hard to do anything with their hands.

✓ It is hard to do anything with their hands.

The original sentence lacks a subject, making it incomplete. Adding 'It is' completes the sentence.

× So I think that washing machine is stripping machines are really important in busy and the lazy day for the people.

✓ So I think that washing machines and sweeping machines are really important for busy and lazy people these days.

Corrected singular/plural forms and replaced 'stripping' with 'sweeping' to match context. Sentence restructured for clarity.

× What I. Don't usually written instructions before using a machine, because when I was a child I used to read instructions before using a machine, which costs a lot of time and also that really interactions can be much more complicated when using a machine, so I don't need to read the instruction.

✓ I don't usually read instructions before using a machine because when I was a child, I used to read them, which took a lot of time. Also, interactions can be more complicated when using a machine, so I don't need to read the instructions now.

Corrected pronoun use and verb forms. 'Written' changed to 'read', 'costs' to 'took', and sentence split for clarity.

× Well, I don't think that it is important to read instructions because it took a lot of time and many machines are quite.

✓ Well, I don't think it is important to read instructions because it takes a lot of time and many machines are quite easy to use.

Added missing adjective 'easy to use' to complete the sentence and corrected tense from past to present to match context.

× so I prefer to my trying them out instead of reading complicated instructions.

✓ So I prefer trying them out instead of reading complicated instructions.

Removed unnecessary 'to my' to correct sentence structure.

× But for the in complicated machines I think that people should read the instructions.

✓ But for complicated machines, I think people should read the instructions.

Removed extra article 'the' and corrected word order for clarity.