Machine— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, and provide specific details using correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps us clean our dirty clothes efficiently, so we always have fresh and tidy clothes to wear.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear, specific examples. Also, avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. For instance, the washing machine cleans our clothes thoroughly, while the sweeping machine helps keep our floors clean and tidy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and slightly unclear. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because they explain how to operate it safely and efficiently, which helps prevent any damage or accidents.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by making sentences more concise and using linking words for better flow. Also, avoid filler words and ensure grammatical accuracy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine because they provide essential information on how to operate it correctly and safely.

× Oh well, there is not something that is. Favorite at my home but a machine.

✓ Oh well, there is not something that is my favorite at my home but a machine.

The sentence is missing the possessive pronoun 'my' before 'favorite' to correctly express possession. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding 'my' clarifies the meaning.

× I would say motion machine as it help us to clean our dirty cloth so that we can wear clothes that are clean.

✓ I would say washing machine as it helps us to clean our dirty clothes so that we can wear clothes that are clean.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'washing machine'. Also, 'cloth' should be plural 'clothes' to refer to garments.

× Yes, I believe all these machines are significant as they help us to.

✓ Yes, I believe all these machines are significant as they help us.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'help us to.' The phrase should be completed or 'to' removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× For example, if I talk about washing machine then this machine help us to clean up dirty clothes so that we can wear tidy clothes and look fresh in.

✓ For example, if I talk about the washing machine, then this machine helps us to clean dirty clothes so that we can wear tidy clothes and look fresh.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'machine'. 'The' is needed before 'washing machine' as a specific machine is referred. 'Look fresh in' is incomplete; 'in' is unnecessary here.

× Oh, by wearing their clothes.

✓ Oh, by wearing those clothes.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect here; 'those' refers to the clothes previously mentioned. Also, the sentence fragment lacks context and should be connected properly.

× And if I talk about sweeping machine.

✓ And if I talk about the sweeping machine,

This is a sentence fragment; it lacks a main verb or completion. Adding 'the' and a comma indicates continuation.

× Yes, instructions are significant while using a new machine that you don't know about, as instructions will tell you about how to use that machine so that we can use it efficiently without. Any.

✓ Yes, instructions are significant while using a new machine that you don't know about, as instructions will tell you how to use that machine so that we can use it efficiently without any problems.

The phrase 'tell you about how to use' is incorrect; 'tell you how to use' is correct. The sentence ends abruptly with 'without. Any.' which is incomplete; it should be 'without any problems' or similar.

× Yes, I believe it's very significant to read instructions or by using a machine as the instructions tell us how to use that machine.

✓ Yes, I believe it's very significant to read instructions before using a machine as the instructions tell us how to use that machine.

The phrase 'or by using a machine' is incorrect; it should be 'before using a machine' to indicate the correct sequence.

× So that if you don't know about like how this machine worked, then I believe everybody should first read instruction and then use it.

✓ So that if you don't know how this machine works, then I believe everybody should first read the instructions and then use it.

The phrase 'don't know about like how' is awkward and incorrect; 'don't know how' is correct. 'Worked' should be 'works' to match present tense. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and preceded by 'the'.