Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one short supporting detail about why you are patient. Avoid redundancy and grammar errors (use present tense consistently and correct possessive forms).

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. My mother taught me the importance of patience and kindness, so I try to stay calm in difficult situations.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons. Use linking words (because, when) and correct grammar: subject-verb order and tense. Avoid contradictory words. Give a concrete example of a situation that makes you impatient.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time because I am usually punctual. For example, when people arrive late to meetings without warning, I get frustrated and anxious.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your overall feeling, then give two specific effects (positive and negative) using linking words (however, although, for example). Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: If I have to do something for a long time, I usually adapt and become more comfortable with it. However, I sometimes get bored during very long tasks, such as long journeys, and need short breaks to stay focused.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly: state your situation (no job) then explain generally why many jobs require patience with specific examples. Use correct nouns and sentence structure, and avoid vague phrases.

Ejemplo: I don't have a job at the moment, but I believe many jobs require patience because employees must deal calmly with customers and cooperate with colleagues. For example, customer service roles need patience to handle complaints effectively.

Sugerencia: Use a clear comparison structure: state whether you are more patient now and give one or two reasons or examples showing how you have changed. Correct tense usage (past vs present) and avoid filler repetitions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a child I was stubborn and often cried when I didn't get something, but with age I have learned to wait and manage my emotions better.

× Yes, of course. I'm a very patient person and mostly my mother teaches me about patience and kindness.

✓ Yes, of course. I'm a very patient person, and my mother mostly taught me about patience and kindness.

The original mixes present and general past influence. Use past simple 'taught' to indicate who taught you in the past. Also adjust word order: 'my mother mostly taught me' is clearer than 'mostly my mother teaches me'. Suggestion: Use past tense for past influences and place adverbs ('mostly') before the verb or after the subject for clarity.

× Well, I think that waiting for too long feel impatient me as I mostly a punctual person and if anybody will. Waiting me so I I'm very angry, I'm depressed, so patient.

✓ Well, I think that waiting for too long makes me feel impatient because I am mostly a punctual person. If someone keeps me waiting, I get very angry and upset, so I try to be patient.

Multiple sentence structure and verb choice errors. 'Waiting for too long feel impatient me' is incorrect word order and verb form; use 'makes me feel impatient'. 'I mostly a punctual person' lacks verb 'am'. 'If anybody will. Waiting me' is fragmented; use 'If someone keeps me waiting'. Replace 'depressed' with 'upset' which fits context. Suggestion: break into clear clauses, ensure subject+verb, and use correct verb patterns like 'makes me feel' and 'keeps me waiting'.

× Doing something continuously for a long time will teach me to that I'm adapting that thing also and give me a proper proper feel to that.

✓ Doing something continuously for a long time teaches me that I am adapting to it and gives me a proper sense of it.

Use correct verb forms and prepositions: 'teaches me that I am adapting to it' (adapted to something uses 'to'). Present simple 'teaches/gives' fits general statements better than 'will teach/give' here. Remove redundant words. Suggestion: use 'adapt to' and match subject-verb number: 'Doing ... teaches'.

× And I'm sometimes I I'm get bored after doing so many long things like too long travel.

✓ And sometimes I get bored after doing many long activities, such as very long travel.

Remove extra pronouns and incorrect auxiliary 'I'm get'. Use 'I get bored' and correct quantifier 'so many long things' to 'many long activities' or 'very long trips'. Suggestion: avoid repeated 'I' and use correct verb phrase 'I get bored'.

× Well, I'm not doing any type of job, but I think that job requires a large patience level as to communicate with the customers and communicate with the staff members.

✓ Well, I'm not working at the moment, but I think jobs require a high level of patience to communicate with customers and staff members.

'I'm not doing any type of job' is awkward; use 'I'm not working' or 'I'm not employed'. 'Job requires a large patience level' uses incorrect noun phrases; use 'jobs require a high level of patience'. Also remove redundant 'communicate'. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'a high level of patience' and 'to communicate with customers and staff'.

× It's very necessary to patients is also teachers about the discipline.

✓ It is also necessary for teachers and parents to teach discipline.

Original is ungrammatical with incorrect word order and noun forms. 'Necessary to patients is also teachers about the discipline' is unintelligible. Likely meaning: teaching discipline is necessary and teachers (and parents) do this. Suggestion: rephrase clearly with 'necessary for X to Y' structure.

× When I was a child, I'm not patient person so much and I'm crying so much and if I need anything.

✓ When I was a child, I was not a very patient person; I cried a lot when I needed something.

Shift tense to past to match 'When I was a child'. Replace present 'I'm' with past 'I was' and 'I'm crying' with 'I cried'. Complete the conditional idea: 'when I needed something'. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits.

× So I'm very stubborn that time. But now I'm I'm I'm I got very patient level.

✓ I was very stubborn then, but now I have become much more patient.

Original mixes tenses and has repeated fillers 'I'm I'm I'm'. 'I got very patient level' is incorrect; use 'I have become much more patient' or 'I am much more patient now'. Suggestion: avoid filler repetitions and use correct tense/aspect to show change over time.