Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect forms (use 'patient' correctly and 'disagreements').

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, when I disagree with my parents or sister, I stay calm and listen to their point of view before responding, so the conversation stays respectful.

Sugerencia: Give one clear reason and explain it with specific details. Use correct verb forms and linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Academic setbacks make me impatient. For example, when I study hard but classmates cheat on tests, I feel frustrated because it seems unfair and it affects my motivation.

Sugerencia: Be concise and precise: state your feeling, give a specific example with clear timeline, and explain why it bothers you. Correct grammar (e.g., 'takes', 'stuck at') and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: I get impatient when tasks take too long. For example, I was frustrated when my Duolingo score was stuck at 120 for weeks because I needed a higher score before the test, which made me feel anxious and overwhelmed.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then support with a concrete workplace example. Use correct tense and sentence structure, and avoid unclear phrases. Mention specific tasks that need patience and a result of your patience.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job requires patience. For instance, when many colleagues ask the manager questions, I stay focused on my tasks and calmly handle interruptions, which led my manager to praise my reliability.

Sugerencia: Make a clear comparison: state current situation, contrast with past using linking words (e.g., 'when I was a child'), give a specific example showing change, and correct grammar.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than in childhood. When I was a child I often argued with my parents, but now I stay calm and discuss my needs politely, which helps resolve conflicts more easily.

× Yes, I'm very patient person and I patient in every situation, for example when my parents disagreement with me, yeah, and like my sister, so I patient.

✓ Yes, I'm a very patient person and I am patient in every situation. For example, when my parents disagree with me or with my sister, I stay patient.

Missing article before 'very patient person' and omitted auxiliary verb 'am' cause incorrect adjective and verb forms; 'disagreement' should be a verb 'disagree' for the clause; pronoun references needed clarity. Suggestion: include the indefinite article 'a' before singular nouns, use 'I am' for present characteristic, and use the verb form 'disagree' for actions.

× And moreover, in my friend's circle and also in every situation I was very kind and patient person and I really like my patient.

✓ Moreover, among my friends and in every situation I am a very kind and patient person, and I really value my patience.

Incorrect pronoun and noun choice: 'my friend's circle' is better rendered as 'among my friends'; 'I was' conflicts with present-tense description; 'I really like my patient' uses 'patient' incorrectly as a noun and an adjective. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense, use 'value my patience' to express appreciation of the trait.

× There are a lot of things that feel me impatient but the most crucial is in my studies like my academic performance.

✓ There are a lot of things that make me feel impatient, but the most crucial is my studies, such as my academic performance.

Use of causative structure is incorrect: 'feel me impatient' should be 'make me feel impatient'. Also 'is in my studies' is awkward; use 'is my studies' or 'such as'. Suggestion: use 'make me feel' for causes and rephrase to specify the subject.

× I would say in my case, my example in school I will do hard work and moreover work hard and write things and my friends were cheating.

✓ I would say that in my case, for example at school, I used to work hard and take notes, but my friends were cheating.

Mixed tenses and awkward phrasing: 'will do hard work' should reflect past habit 'used to work hard' when recounting a past example; 'write things' is vague—'take notes' is clearer. Suggestion: use past tense for past habitual actions and choose precise verbs.

× So this feel me impatient because I cannot. I read these things.

✓ So this makes me feel impatient because I cannot ignore it when I read these things.

Incorrect verb form 'feel me impatient' should be 'make me feel impatient'; sentence fragments and missing connectors. Suggestion: use 'make me feel' and combine clauses to show cause and effect; add objects like 'ignore it' to complete meaning.

× I feel very impatient when something take a long time.

✓ I feel very impatient when something takes a long time.

Subject-verb agreement in present tense: singular 'something' requires verb 'takes' not 'take'. Suggestion: ensure third-person singular verbs end with -s in present simple.

× For example, uh, in my case my Duolingo score will stuck in 120 and I want 125 because in my saying real test it will be 115.

✓ For example, my Duolingo score got stuck at 120 and I wanted 125 because in my real test I scored 115.

Incorrect use of future 'will' with stative/result verbs; 'stuck' needs passive or past 'got stuck'; mixed tenses and poorly formed clauses. Suggestion: use past tense for completed events ('got stuck','scored') and avoid 'will' when describing past outcomes. },{