Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy. Use more precise vocabulary and structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence followed by supporting details. For example, instead of repeating 'coolness', you can say 'calm' or 'composure'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. Although external situations sometimes test my patience, I usually remain calm and composed in most circumstances.

Sugerencia: Focus on directly answering the question with clear examples. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid grammatical errors like 'tend to be lose'.

Ejemplo: I usually stay calm, but I feel impatient when I get stuck in traffic jams or face unexpected delays, especially when I have important tasks to complete.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'however' correctly and provide specific details about how you manage frustration.

Ejemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I sometimes feel frustrated. However, I stay calm by practising meditation and exercises, which help me maintain my patience.

Sugerencia: Avoid grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'patience and spine'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your job.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job in sales demands a great deal of patience because I interact with many customers daily and need to process their orders carefully.

Sugerencia: Clarify your ideas and avoid contradictory statements. Use complete sentences and linking words to express how your patience has changed over time.

Ejemplo: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child because life experiences have taught me to stay calm in different situations.

× Sometimes I I lose my coolness because of outer circumstances, but I tend to be always very patient.

✓ Sometimes I lose my coolness because of outer circumstances, but I tend to always be very patient.

The phrase 'tend to be always' is incorrect because the verb 'tend to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, and the adverb 'always' should be placed before the verb for correct emphasis. So, 'tend to always be' is the correct form.

× Sometimes I tend to be lose my patience due to the raising of traffic jams, delays and some important things.

✓ Sometimes I tend to lose my patience due to the increase in traffic jams, delays, and some important things.

The phrase 'tend to be lose' is incorrect; after 'tend to' the base verb 'lose' should be used without 'be'. Also, 'raising of traffic jams' is unnatural; 'increase in traffic jams' is more appropriate.

× I make myself very composure and feel calmness.

✓ I make myself very composed and feel calm.

'Composure' and 'calmness' are nouns, but here adjectives are needed to describe the state. 'Composed' and 'calm' are the correct adjectives to use.

× I maintain my patience so this and for that I do meditation and all this exercise.

✓ I maintain my patience, so for this, I do meditation and all these exercises.

The phrase 'so this and for that' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'so for this' to indicate purpose. Also, 'all this exercise' should be 'all these exercises' to match plural form.

× Sales requires a lot of patience to deal with the customers and executed the orders I in a day in day out.

✓ Sales requires a lot of patience to deal with customers and execute the orders day in and day out.

The verb 'executed' is incorrectly used in past tense; it should be in base form 'execute' to match 'requires' and the infinitive structure. Also, 'the customers' should be 'customers' as a general statement.

× I deal with a lot of people with patience and spine so obviously.

✓ I deal with a lot of people with patience and resilience, so obviously.

'Spine' is a noun meaning backbone but is not used to describe patience. 'Resilience' is a better noun to express strength in this context.

× Must say I'm no more patient than when I was child.

✓ I must say I'm more patient now than when I was a child.

The modal verb 'must' should be preceded by 'I' for correct sentence structure. Also, 'no more patient' contradicts the intended meaning; 'more patient' is correct. 'When I was child' needs the article 'a' before 'child'.

× Because of the circumstances. I've made me to be more patient than when I was child.

✓ Because of the circumstances, I have become more patient than when I was a child.

'I've made me to be' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I have become'. Also, 'when I was child' needs the article 'a' before 'child'. The two sentences should be combined properly with a comma.

× I typically cool all the time, all the circumstances.

✓ I am typically calm all the time, in all circumstances.

'Cool' is informal and not appropriate here; 'calm' is better. Also, 'all the circumstances' should be 'in all circumstances' to express the idea correctly.