Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Saying "I have a lot of patients" is confusing and likely a misuse of the word "patients" instead of "patience." Try to be more precise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even in stressful situations. However, I do sometimes feel anxious when things don't go as planned.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and could be more fluent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same phrases. Also, try to provide a specific example or reason to enrich your response.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when tasks take longer than I expect because it disrupts my schedule. Although I try to stay calm, prolonged delays often make me frustrated.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and slightly unclear at the end. Try to finish your sentences fully and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Adding more specific details or feelings would improve your response.

Ejemplo: Usually, I don't mind working on tasks for a long time; however, if I can't find a solution after much effort, I become impatient. For instance, when solving a difficult math problem, I get frustrated if the answer eludes me despite trying for hours.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid repeating the word "patient" multiple times and try to explain your job responsibilities more precisely. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job as a detailing engineer requires a lot of patience because I need to carefully review documents to identify hidden issues. Sometimes, I get annoyed when I can't find the correct information quickly.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear phrases, such as "I used to get a nerd easily," which seems incorrect. Try to use clearer vocabulary and avoid mistakes. Also, structure your answer with linking words to show contrast between past and present.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. I used to get frustrated easily, but as I grew older, I learned to stay calm and focus on finding solutions rather than worrying about problems.

× I have a lot of patients.

✓ I have a lot of patience.

The word 'patients' refers to people receiving medical care, which is incorrect in this context. The correct word is 'patience', which means the ability to wait calmly. This is a singular noun and fits the intended meaning.

× I sometimes get angry or anxious.

✓ I sometimes get angry or anxious.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain any errors related to the provided grammar problem types.

× Something which takes longer than I expected.

✓ Something which takes longer than I expect.

The sentence is describing a general situation, so the present tense 'expect' is more appropriate than the past tense 'expected' to match the habitual context.

× That is what makes me impatient.

✓ That is what makes me impatient.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain any errors related to the provided grammar problem types.

× Somehow I try to control my anger or frustration during this time.

✓ Somehow I try to control my anger or frustration during this time.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain any errors related to the provided grammar problem types.

× Still, if the thing takes a lot of time, then I go impatient and I get frustrated.

✓ Still, if something takes a lot of time, then I become impatient and get frustrated.

The phrase 'the thing' is vague; 'something' is more natural here. Also, 'go impatient' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'become impatient'. The second 'I' before 'get frustrated' can be omitted for smoother flow.

× Usually I don't mind if I have to do something for a long time, but if I don't get the solution or I'm not able to get resolved that problem, I get impatient.

✓ Usually I don't mind if I have to do something for a long time, but if I don't get the solution or I'm not able to resolve that problem, I get impatient.

The phrase 'get resolved that problem' is incorrect. The correct verb form is 'resolve that problem' because 'resolve' is an active verb here, and 'get' is unnecessary.

× For example, if I am looking for a maths solution and if I don't get answer even after trying a long time, I get.

✓ For example, if I am looking for a math solution and don't get an answer even after trying for a long time, I get frustrated.

'Maths' is commonly 'math' in Canadian English. 'Get answer' is missing the article 'an'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'frustrated' completes the thought.

× Yes, I work as a detailing engineer so I have to be patient and look for a lot of questions or queries which is hidden in the paper.

✓ Yes, I work as a detailing engineer, so I have to be patient and look for a lot of questions or queries which are hidden in the paper.

The relative clause refers to 'questions or queries' which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× So I have to remain patient and sometimes I get annoyed because I won't be able to resolve or find the correct question.

✓ So I have to remain patient and sometimes I get annoyed because I won't be able to resolve or find the correct question.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain any errors related to the provided grammar problem types.

× Yes, of course. When I was a kid I used to be very impatient.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a kid, I used to be very impatient.

A comma after 'kid' improves readability but is not a grammar error per se.

× I used to get a nerd easily.

✓ I used to get annoyed easily.

The word 'nerd' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'annoyed', which means irritated or upset.

× But as I grew up I started being a bit calm and think about the solution more than the question, so I now feel I'm better.

✓ But as I grew up, I started being a bit calmer and thinking about the solution more than the question, so I now feel I'm better.

'Calm' should be the comparative form 'calmer' to indicate change. 'Think' should be in the gerund form 'thinking' to match 'started being'. Adding a comma after 'grew up' improves clarity.