Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but contains some hesitations and minor grammatical errors. To improve, try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use more precise expressions. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and plural forms are correct. For example, say 'I do not get angry easily' and 'I take time to understand things before reacting.'

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely, I am a patient person because I do not get angry easily. I always take time to understand situations and respond thoughtfully.

Sugerencia: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrases which affect clarity. To improve, avoid repeating words and structure your sentences clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about what makes you impatient and explain briefly. For example, say 'I feel impatient when my kids do not focus during teaching because I want them to learn well.'

Ejemplo: I feel impatient sometimes when teaching my kids because they lose focus. Also, certain job projects can make me impatient if progress is slow, but I try to stay calm and not show it outwardly.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys the idea but has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Avoid unnecessary words like 'Washington' which seems out of context. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, say 'I usually consider whether the task is worthwhile. If it benefits me, I continue; otherwise, I prefer not to spend too much time on it.'

Ejemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I think about whether it is worth my effort. If it benefits me, like earning money or gaining experience, I continue patiently.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use plural forms correctly and link ideas smoothly. For example, say 'My job in customer relationship management requires a lot of patience because customers can sometimes react harshly. Therefore, I must remain calm and respond politely to their concerns.'

Ejemplo: My job in customer relationship management requires me to be patient. Customers sometimes react harshly, so I always stay calm and handle their issues politely.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some hesitations and grammatical mistakes. To improve, avoid filler words and use correct verb forms. Also, clarify your ideas with linking words. For example, say 'I think I have become more patient now. As a child, I was less patient with my parents, but after becoming a parent myself, my patience has increased.'

Ejemplo: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a child, I was less patient with my parents, but after having my own family, I have learned to be more understanding and patient.

× I definitely take time to understand thing and to react.

✓ I definitely take time to understand things and to react.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple unspecified items. Using the plural form is grammatically correct here.

× Few of the events or things make me impatient.

✓ A few of the events or things make me impatient.

The phrase 'Few of the events' implies almost none, which is likely not intended. 'A few' indicates some, which fits the context better.

× So I feel feel started impatient not on them but for myself inside and sometimes growth.

✓ So I feel I started feeling impatient not at them but with myself inside and sometimes with growth.

The sentence has repetition and incorrect verb forms. 'Feel feel started impatient' is incorrect; it should be 'I started feeling impatient'. Also, prepositions 'on' and 'for' are incorrect here; 'at' and 'with' are appropriate.

× Sometimes some job profile or project make me impatient.

✓ Sometimes some job profiles or projects make me impatient.

The subject is plural, so the verb should be 'make' and the nouns should be plural 'profiles' and 'projects' to agree in number.

× Sometimes some job profile or project make me impatient.

✓ Sometimes some job profiles or projects make me impatient.

The nouns 'job profile' and 'project' should be plural to match the plural verb 'make' and to indicate multiple instances.

× I usually analyze the circumstances like if something which I have to do for a long time, it is giving something in return or not.

✓ I usually analyze the circumstances, like if there is something which I have to do for a long time, whether it is giving something in return or not.

The sentence lacks 'there is' to introduce the subject properly, which is a 'There be issue'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× If it is just for the waste of time, definitely I will not do it for long time and I will Washington walk out.

✓ If it is just a waste of time, definitely I will not do it for a long time and I will walk out.

The phrase 'for the waste of time' is incorrect; it should be 'a waste of time'. Also, 'for long time' should be 'for a long time'. The word 'Washington' seems to be an error and is removed.

× Yes, I am into the customer, customer relationship management and this job definitely require to be patient because I have to deal with the customer.

✓ Yes, I am in customer relationship management and this job definitely requires me to be patient because I have to deal with customers.

The phrase 'I am into the customer' is incorrect; 'I am in customer relationship management' is correct. Also, 'require to be patient' should be 'requires me to be patient'. 'Customer' should be plural when referring generally.

× this job definitely require to be patient because I have to deal with the customer.

✓ this job definitely requires me to be patient because I have to deal with the customers.

The subject 'job' is singular, so the verb should be 'requires' not 'require'. Also, 'customer' should be plural when referring generally.

× Customer reacts very roughly many times and we have to stay calm and to react very calmly on their queries or on their problems or whatever the cases they bring to us.

✓ Customers react very roughly many times and we have to stay calm and react very calmly to their queries, problems, or whatever cases they bring to us.

'Customer' should be plural 'Customers'. The preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'to' is the correct preposition with 'react'. Also, 'to react' is better without 'to' after 'stay calm'.

× I feel that I haven't changed much, but uh, maybe we, uh, are not patient with our parents.

✓ I feel that I haven't changed much, but maybe we are not patient with our parents.

The sentence has unnecessary fillers 'uh' which can be omitted for clarity. The pronouns are correct.

× We sometimes reacts to our parents, whatever suggestions they give, but after becoming a parent, like after getting married or having kids, you change yourself and uh, the patient's level become more.

✓ We sometimes react to our parents, whatever suggestions they give, but after becoming a parent, like after getting married or having kids, you change yourself and the patience level becomes more.

The verb 'reacts' should be 'react' to agree with plural subject 'we'. 'Patient's level' is incorrect; it should be 'patience level'. The verb 'become' should be 'becomes' to agree with singular subject 'level'.