Patience— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Are you a patient person?
Candidato
Well, probably, probably not. I'm not that so-called patient person. When I get something which is very in a hurry, I often get nervous and get upset and I get wow, I have a so tight schedule. I need to do it in a really little time I think. I don't think I'm a patient person.
Examinador
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Candidato
Well, most of the time the time schedule and something is really hard and in a hurry. I need to finish this in times in a very short time, wake up everything. I've got something out of my plan, I really need to, I really feel.
Examinador
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Candidato
Well, it depends on the things. If I do something I'm interested in, I'm delighted to do it. I feel very happy and very, very good to do it. But if I do something I do not dislike it, I will feel more impatient and feel upset.
Examinador
Does your job require you to be patient?
Candidato
Well, in in case due to I am a student then I haven't worked so far. But according to the subjects I learned, I think it's pretty important to be patient because I need to know more about the knowledges.
Examinador
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Candidato
It's definitely yes. When I was a child I will be nervous except for everything for impatient. But in recent years I've been learned how to be more patient to everything I encounter and the thing I need to the situation I need to face.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答时语言不够自然流畅，存在重复和语法错误，且表达较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达自己的观点。
Ejemplo: I am not a very patient person. When I have to do things quickly, I often feel nervous and stressed because my schedule is very tight.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和表达混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议用简单明了的句子表达原因，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ejemplo: I feel impatient mostly when I have a tight schedule and difficult tasks. If I have to finish something quickly and it is hard, I get stressed and upset.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答较为自然，但表达中有语法错误和重复。建议注意句子结构，避免双重否定，使用更准确的词汇表达感受。
Ejemplo: It depends on the task. If I am interested in it, I enjoy doing it for a long time. However, if I dislike the task, I become impatient and upset.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够简洁。建议简化句子，注意名词单复数和冠词的使用，表达更准确。
Ejemplo: I am a student and have not worked yet. However, I think patience is important in studying because learning requires time and effort.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚表达对比和变化。
Ejemplo: Definitely yes. When I was a child, I used to get nervous and impatient easily. But in recent years, I have learned to be more patient with different situations I face.
Gramática
× I need to know more about the knowledges.
✓ I need to know more about knowledge.
“knowledge”是不可数名词，不能加复数形式“knowledges”。应使用单数形式。
× When I was a child I will be nervous except for everything for impatient.
✓ When I was a child I was nervous about everything and impatient.
句子描述过去的情况，应使用过去时态“was”，而不是将来时“will be”。
× But in recent years I've been learned how to be more patient to everything I encounter and the thing I need to the situation I need to face.
✓ But in recent years I've learned how to be more patient with everything I encounter and the situations I need to face.
“have been learned”结构错误，应为现在完成时“have learned”。另外，“patient to”应改为“patient with”，介词使用错误。
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