Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to directly answer the question first, then provide relevant supporting details in a logical order. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references like '2024'.

Ejemplo: I am not very patient at the moment because I am recovering from a serious leg injury I had last year. This experience has made me more anxious and less patient than before.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more precise in your explanation.

Ejemplo: I usually feel impatient when I don't have my smartphone with me because I rely on it for communication and information. For instance, if I leave it at home, I start feeling anxious and disconnected.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I feel very stressed when I have to work for a long time without breaks. I know my capacity is limited, so I need to rest periodically; otherwise, my body starts hurting and I cannot continue working effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and check verb forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job definitely requires a lot of patience because I manage many people and guide them through their tasks. For example, if I lose my temper and start shouting, they might not work properly. Therefore, staying calm and practising patience helps me communicate effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to clearly state your opinion first, then explain with specific reasons using proper sentence structure and linking words.

Ejemplo: I think I am less patient now than when I was a child because I have become addicted to my smartphone. For example, I get more anxious and impatient when my phone is not with me.

× Right now I am not a patient person, but it is I was patient before.

✓ Right now I am not a patient person, but I was patient before.

The phrase 'it is I was patient before' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I was patient before' to indicate past state. The unnecessary 'it is' should be removed for grammatical correctness.

× 2024 where I had a serious injury on my leg.

✓ In 2024, I had a serious injury on my leg.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb structure. Adding 'In' before the year and restructuring the sentence makes it grammatically correct and clear.

× I had accident.

✓ I had an accident.

The noun 'accident' is countable and requires an article. The correct form is 'an accident'.

× if I left my smartphone into home, I start feeling anxiety.

✓ if I leave my smartphone at home, I start feeling anxiety.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect here; 'at home' is the correct phrase. Also, 'left' should be 'leave' to maintain present tense consistency.

× if I left my smartphone into home, I start feeling anxiety.

✓ if I leave my smartphone at home, I start feeling anxiety.

The conditional sentence requires present tense 'leave' to express habitual action, not past tense 'left'.

× Where I have to rely on my fire smart on the smartphone for the talks and communication so.

✓ I have to rely on my smartphone for calls and communication.

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and phrases. 'Where' is unnecessary, 'fire smart on the smartphone' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Simplifying to 'I have to rely on my smartphone for calls and communication' is correct.

× It feels very stressful day or a time because my capacity.

✓ It feels very stressful at times because of my capacity.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. Adding 'at times' and 'because of' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I know that is only for to ask that I can work for a stretch in between I need a specific time of rest, otherwise my body starts painting.

✓ I know that I can only work for a stretch; in between, I need specific rest time, otherwise my body starts hurting.

The phrase 'only for to ask' is incorrect; it should be 'I can only work'. 'Starts painting' is a mishearing or typo for 'starts hurting'. Prepositions and sentence flow are corrected for clarity.

× my job definitely requires a lot of patience because I have to manage many peoples and guide them through their task.

✓ My job definitely requires a lot of patience because I have to manage many people and guide them through their tasks.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'them'.

× For example if a loss my temper and start shouting that they might have not to work properly.

✓ For example, if I lose my temper and start shouting, they might not work properly.

'a loss' should be 'I lose'. The phrase 'have not to work properly' is incorrect; it should be 'might not work properly'. Pronouns and verb forms are corrected.

× So staying calm and practice helps me communicate.

✓ So staying calm and practicing helps me communicate.

'Practice' should be the gerund 'practicing' to parallel 'staying'. This corrects the conjunction and verb form usage.

× I think no I am not that much patient when I was child because I have got an addicted of mobile phone or are we can call a smartphone Because of that my exactly start getting increases for example when I the when mobile phone is not there.

✓ I think no, I was not that patient when I was a child because I was addicted to mobile phones, or we can call them smartphones. Because of that, my anxiety started increasing, for example, when the mobile phone was not there.

Multiple tense errors: 'am not' should be 'was not' to match past time 'when I was a child'. 'Have got an addicted' is incorrect; correct is 'was addicted to'. 'My exactly start getting increases' is unclear and corrected to 'my anxiety started increasing'. Prepositions and articles are also corrected for clarity.