Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免口语化错误，使用完整句子表达观点。

Ejemplo: I am not a very patient person because I get upset when babies cry loudly. Also, if I cannot solve a problem quickly, I feel frustrated.

Sugerencia: 回答不够清晰，句子断断续续，表达混乱。建议用完整句子直接说明原因，并避免重复和语法错误。

Ejemplo: I feel impatient because I have a personality that dislikes waiting or not understanding things quickly.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议用连贯的句子表达感受，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I feel bored and impatient when I have to work or study for a long time, such as four hours. This often makes me frustrated.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议直接回答问题并用完整句子说明情况，避免断句和错误用词。

Ejemplo: I am a student, so I don't have a job. However, my lessons usually last about half an hour, and sometimes I need to be patient during that time.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，建议用更准确的句子表达比较和原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to handle tasks like paperwork by myself.

× Probably not because little babies crying gonna make me mad and sometimes.

✓ Probably not because little babies crying are gonna make me mad sometimes.

这里缺少了动词be的形式，'babies crying'作为主语需要用'are'连接，表示现在进行时态。

× If I didn't work out something, I gotta be very upset.

✓ If I don't work out something, I get very upset.

这里使用了错误的时态和情态动词，条件句中应使用一般现在时，'gotta'是口语缩写，应改为正式表达。

× I can't understand something I couldn't. Stand because.

✓ I can't understand something I couldn't stand because.

'stand'是动词原形，前面不需要句号，且应与前半句连贯。

× I'm a person which is not patient father time.

✓ I'm a person who is not patient with time.

'which'用于物，指人时应使用'who'，'father time'用法错误，应为'time'。

× Are you really feel so boring when I do something for a long time?

✓ Do you really feel so bored when you do something for a long time?

疑问句结构错误，应使用助动词'do'，'boring'形容事物，'bored'形容人的感受。

× if I'm working a largely working or studying. 4 hours.

✓ if I'm working a lot or studying for 4 hours.

'largely working'用法错误，应为'working a lot'，并且缺少介词'for'。

× I gotta be impatient.

✓ I get impatient.

'gotta'是口语缩写，正式表达应为'I get impatient'。

× That is make me frustrated.

✓ That makes me frustrated.

主谓不一致，'is make'错误，应为第三人称单数动词'makes'。

× Sometimes my lesson. Always during like half an hour.

✓ Sometimes my lessons always last for about half an hour.

'during'用法错误，应使用'last for'表示持续时间，'lesson'应为复数。

× So. I can be stained. This time.

✓ So, I can be patient this time.

'stained'用法错误，应为'patient'，表示有耐心。

× People can always be more better than before, so I'm a more patient.

✓ People can always be better than before, so I'm more patient.

'more better'是双重比较错误，应只用'better'，'a more patient'中冠词'a'不应出现。

× Rather then when I was young because.

✓ Rather than when I was young because

'then'应为比较连词'than'，表示比较。

× I can do something paperwork myself this time.

✓ I can do some paperwork myself this time.

'something paperwork'用法错误，应为'some paperwork'，'paperwork'是不可数名词。