Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains a vocabulary mistake ('pleasant' instead of 'patient'). Try to use the correct word and give a direct answer first, then explain briefly. For example, say 'I am not a very patient person because I often get angry quickly.'

Ejemplo: I am not a very patient person because I often get angry quickly. However, I am trying to improve by practicing relaxation techniques.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit disorganized and has some grammar mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add details. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and unclear words like 'mate'.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when things don't go as I planned because I like order. However, I am trying to control my anger by practicing yoga and deep breathing exercises.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and has grammar errors ('a lazy', 'hung up'). Try to complete your sentences and use correct grammar. Also, explain how you try to overcome boredom with linking words.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient and lazy when I have to do something for a long time because it makes me bored. However, I try to stay focused by taking short breaks and setting small goals.

Sugerencia: You made a vocabulary mistake ('present' instead of 'patient'). Use the correct word and add more details to support your answer with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I work as a receptionist in a hotel, and I often deal with many clients who may have different needs or complaints.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains vocabulary mistakes ('present' instead of 'patient'). Also, the sentence is incomplete and lacks supporting details. Try to give a clear opinion and explain why.

Ejemplo: No, I am not more patient now than when I was a child because I used to be more patient before, but now I get frustrated more easily due to stress.

× I think I'm not a pleasant person because I know I have anger issues and I get angry frequently.

✓ I think I'm not a patient person because I know I have anger issues and I get angry frequently.

The adjective 'pleasant' means friendly or agreeable, which does not fit the context. The correct adjective is 'patient' to describe someone who can tolerate delays or problems without getting angry.

× When things don't go as I planned, it makes me feel impatient and.

✓ When things don't go as I planned, it makes me feel impatient.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and' without completing the thought, causing a sentence fragment. Removing 'and' corrects the sentence structure.

× I'm a I have anger issues which I cannot control but I'm trying to control it by doing mate. Yoga. And practicing deep breathing. Anything.

✓ I have anger issues which I cannot control, but I'm trying to control it by doing meditation, yoga, and practicing deep breathing exercises.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'mate.' and 'Anything.' which disrupt the flow. Combining the fragments into a coherent sentence and correcting 'mate' to 'meditation' improves clarity and grammar.

× When I have to do something for a long time, I feel very impatient. And a lazy because I do not like to hung up on something that makes me feel bored.

✓ When I have to do something for a long time, I feel very impatient and lazy because I do not like to hang on to something that makes me feel bored.

The phrase 'And a lazy' is incorrect; it should be 'and lazy' to connect adjectives properly. Also, 'hung up on' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'hang on to' meaning to continue doing something.

× But I try to overcome this situation by.

✓ But I try to overcome this situation by staying focused and taking breaks.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding a complete thought after 'by' corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, of course my job requires me to be present because I work as a receptionist in a hotel and I need to deal with clients.

✓ Yes, of course my job requires me to be patient because I work as a receptionist in a hotel and I need to deal with clients.

The word 'present' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'patient' to describe the quality needed for the job.

× I think no, because I used to be more present. In my childhood, then, now.

✓ I think no, because I used to be more patient in my childhood than now.

Again, 'present' is incorrect; it should be 'patient'. Also, the sentence fragments 'In my childhood, then, now.' are combined into a single coherent sentence for clarity.