Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially because my job requires it. Sometimes, situations become very critical, and patience is essential to handle them effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid repeating words like 'systematic' and 'system'. Use linking words to explain your reasons more smoothly.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when things don't go according to plan or when the work isn't done systematically, which can be quite frustrating for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words to separate mental and physical fatigue. Keep sentences concise and clear.

Ejemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I often feel tired and stressed. For example, mental tasks can be mentally exhausting, while physical work, like mine, makes me physically tired.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more directly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job definitely requires patience. Since I do a lot of physical work, I need to stay patient to handle stressful and critical situations effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but is difficult to understand due to grammar and word choice errors. Try to use simpler sentences and clearer vocabulary to express your ideas.

Ejemplo: Definitely, I am more patient now than when I was a child. As I have grown and gained experience, I have learned how to handle difficult situations better.

× Yes Sir, I'm a very patient so persons specially the field where I work is need patience becauses sometime we are in a situation that the big situation become very critical and I become frustrated.

✓ Yes Sir, I'm a very patient person, especially in the field where I work, which needs patience because sometimes we are in situations where the big situation becomes very critical and I become frustrated.

The word 'persons' is incorrect here; the singular form 'person' should be used to match 'a very patient'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Situation' should be plural 'situations' to match the context. 'Become' should be 'becomes' to agree with singular subject 'situation'. The sentence needed commas for clarity.

× So we need a patience to handle this kind of situation.

✓ So we need patience to handle this kind of situation.

'Patience' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the usage.

× Yeah, the most probable reason to become impatient is that sometimes we are doing a work and it's not according to our plan or not according to the system systematic way.

✓ Yeah, the most probable reason for becoming impatient is that sometimes we are doing work and it's not according to our plan or the systematic way.

'Doing a work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. 'System systematic way' is redundant; 'systematic way' suffices. Also, 'reason to become' should be 'reason for becoming' for correct idiomatic expression.

× So the situation becomes so frustrated for me.

✓ So the situation becomes very frustrating for me.

'Frustrated' is an adjective describing a feeling experienced by a person, not a situation. The correct adjective to describe the situation is 'frustrating'. Also, 'so' is better replaced with 'very' for clarity.

× Yeah, sometimes when you do something for a long time we need we have become so tired, stressful, especially the deep end of work which you are you working if are you working on the mental is become so mentally stressful or you are do some physical work.

✓ Yeah, sometimes when you do something for a long time, we become very tired and stressed, especially the deep end of work which you are doing; if you are working on mental tasks, it becomes mentally stressful, or if you do some physical work.

The sentence has pronoun confusion and awkward phrasing. 'We need we have become' is incorrect; 'we become' is correct. 'Stressful' should be 'stressed' to describe a feeling. 'You are you working if are you working' is incorrect; it should be 'which you are doing; if you are working'. Also, 'is become' should be 'it becomes'. The sentence was restructured for clarity.

× As I as I say, I'm working a physical field, so I become more physically tired.

✓ As I said, I'm working in a physical field, so I become more physically tired.

'As I as I say' is repetitive and incorrect; 'As I said' is appropriate. 'Working a physical field' should be 'working in a physical field' to use the correct preposition.

× You say definitely not my work.

✓ I would say definitely not my work.

The phrase 'You say' is incorrect in this context; the speaker should say 'I would say' to express their opinion politely.

× Even then the person who's working anywhere in the field, they need a patients to handle the situations and specially the field where I working very the too much physical work.

✓ Even then, the person who's working anywhere in the field needs patience to handle situations, especially in the field where I am working, which involves a lot of physical work.

'They need a patients' is incorrect; 'person' is singular so 'needs' is singular verb and 'patience' is uncountable without 'a'. 'Situations' should be plural without 'the'. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. 'Where I working very the too much physical work' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'where I am working, which involves a lot of physical work'.

× So you need more patient patience to handle the situation because sometimes the situations become very critical or stressful.

✓ So you need more patience to handle the situation because sometimes situations become very critical or stressful.

'More patient patience' is redundant and incorrect; 'more patience' suffices. 'The situations' should be 'situations' as a general statement.

× Is definitely when you grow up.

✓ It is definitely when you grow up.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It' at the beginning.

× Grow up your you become more patience, you know how to handle the situations and you give you become more experience the situation you face an you become heavy choele to handling these kind of situations.

✓ When you grow up, you become more patient, you know how to handle situations, and you gain more experience with the situations you face, and you become better able to handle these kinds of situations.

'More patience' should be 'more patient' (adjective). 'You give you become more experience' is incorrect; 'you gain more experience' is correct. 'Heavy choele to handling' is unclear and corrected to 'better able to handle'. 'These kind of situations' should be 'these kinds of situations' for plural agreement.

× Now I am become more patient as compared since my childhood.

✓ Now I have become more patient compared to when I was a child.

'I am become' is incorrect; the present perfect 'I have become' is correct. 'As compared since my childhood' is awkward; 'compared to when I was a child' is clearer and grammatically correct.