Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your response smoother. Also, use varied vocabulary to express impatience.

Ejemplo: No, I am not a very patient person because I prefer to complete my tasks quickly. Waiting for a long time makes me feel restless, so I tend to be quite impatient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on directly answering the question with clear sentences and avoid unnecessary phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when tasks take longer than expected because I like to finish my work quickly. Therefore, delays or waiting periods make me uneasy.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I feel quite bored and irritated when I have to work on something for a long time because I prefer to complete tasks quickly. Waiting for several days to finish a task makes me restless.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Although I am not working currently, when I was a student, my school required patience because teachers assigned tasks with deadlines, and I had to complete them on time.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows good content but ends abruptly and has some grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned from experience that good things take time. Being patient helps me achieve my goals without making mistakes due to impatience.

× No, I would say I'm I'm not a very patient person as I want my things to get done as quickly as possible.

✓ No, I would say I'm not a very patient person because I want my things to get done as quickly as possible.

The sentence has a repeated phrase 'I'm I'm' and uses 'as' incorrectly to show cause. It should be 'because' to indicate reason. Also, repetition is a sentence structure error that needs correction.

× Are you really have no clue words what makes me impatient?

✓ You really have no clue what makes me impatient, do you?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It mixes question and statement improperly. The corrected sentence uses a tag question for clarity and proper structure.

× But I am just that kind of person who wants my team to get pretty quickly because I cannot wait for a longer period of time to get my task done.

✓ But I am just that kind of person who wants my team to finish quickly because I cannot wait for a long time to get my task done.

The pronoun 'team' is used correctly but 'get pretty quickly' is incorrect. 'Get' should be replaced with 'finish' and 'pretty quickly' is informal and unclear. Also, 'a longer period of time' is better as 'a long time' for naturalness.

× So I would want my contact to get completed as fast as possible.

✓ So I would want my contract to be completed as fast as possible.

The word 'contact' seems to be a typo for 'contract'. Also, 'get completed' should be 'be completed' for correct passive voice usage.

× I feel quite bored as. I am a person would want at who'd want to achieve the task as fast as possible, but if I have to wait for a longer period of time, it just gets very irritating for me as I'm not that kind of person who would wait for two to three days to complete attask I've I would just refer.

✓ I feel quite bored. I am a person who wants to achieve the task as fast as possible, but if I have to wait for a long time, it just gets very irritating for me because I'm not the kind of person who would wait for two to three days to complete a task; I would just prefer to avoid it.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains many errors including missing words, incorrect pronouns, and unclear phrases like 'attask I've I would just refer'. The correction fixes sentence fragments, clarifies meaning, and corrects pronouns and vocabulary.

× I am currently not doing any work but when I was in school it required a lot of patience as the teacher as my teacher would give me assignments and she would. Give us a deadline to complete the desired task in the desired time and I would have to complete the task.

✓ I am currently not working, but when I was in school, it required a lot of patience because my teacher would give me assignments and set deadlines to complete the tasks on time, and I had to complete them.

The sentence has run-on and fragmented parts, such as 'she would. Give us a deadline'. The correction combines sentences properly, removes redundancy, and improves clarity.

× Yes, I think I have become quite patient now. It is because you learn from experience that good things take time and you need to have patience to get all the things you want. If we are very impatient regarding any work it may we make we may.

✓ Yes, I think I have become quite patient now. This is because you learn from experience that good things take time and you need to have patience to get everything you want. If we are very impatient regarding any work, it may cause problems.

The last sentence is incomplete and confusing ('it may we make we may'). The correction completes the thought and improves sentence flow and clarity.