Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, which is good. However, to improve, try to avoid repeating the same idea and add a specific example to make your answer more engaging and natural. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I always try to stay calm during difficult situations. For instance, when I face challenges at school, I take deep breaths and think carefully before reacting, which helps me handle stress effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. To improve, focus on one specific cause of impatience and explain it clearly using correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to organize your thoughts logically.

Ejemplo: One thing that makes me feel impatient is when a close friend does not listen to me carefully. For example, if I am sharing something important and they get distracted, I feel frustrated because I want to be understood.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some good ideas but is a bit confusing due to grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. To improve, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and use appropriate linking words. Also, avoid repetition and check your verb forms.

Ejemplo: I usually feel good when I have to do something for a long time because I like to stay busy. For example, I focus on my studies or hobbies to avoid feeling stressed or anxious, which many young people experience when they are idle.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. To improve, answer directly and clearly, and avoid repeating the same idea. Use simple and correct sentences.

Ejemplo: No, my job does not require me to be patient because I am a student and do not have a job yet.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows good content but is affected by grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. To improve, use correct tenses and sentence structures, and provide clear comparisons with linking words. Also, avoid vague expressions.

Ejemplo: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to get angry easily. However, nowadays I try to stay calm in every situation, which helps me handle problems better.

× There are so many things are one of the most thing which I feel UN patient is when one of my close friend does not lessen.

✓ There are so many things; one of the main things that makes me feel impatient is when one of my close friends does not listen.

The original sentence has a confusing structure and redundancy with 'There are so many things are'. Also, 'most thing' should be 'main things' or 'most important things'. 'UN patient' should be 'impatient'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'one of my close friends'. 'Lessen' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'listen'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× My things are earth talks which is very uh stuff going on in my life.

✓ My concerns are serious talks, which are very important things going on in my life.

'My things are earth talks' is unclear and incorrect. 'Earth talks' is not a proper phrase. It seems the student meant 'serious talks' or 'important matters'. Also, 'which is very uh stuff' is vague and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects pronoun and noun usage.

× So mostly I feel good too are doing well thanks for a long time.

✓ So mostly I feel good and am doing well for a long time.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Too are doing well thanks for a long time' is incorrect. The correction provides a proper sentence structure with correct verb forms and clearer meaning.

× Mostly I prefer to keep myself busy rather than doing a rather than going into any kind of stress or anxiety.

✓ Mostly I prefer to keep myself busy rather than going into any kind of stress or anxiety.

The phrase 'rather than doing a rather than going' is redundant and incorrect. The correction removes the repeated 'rather than' and simplifies the sentence for clarity.

× Because nowaday mostly youngsters are going into the anxiety when they does not keep doing any work in their life.

✓ Because nowadays, mostly youngsters experience anxiety when they do not keep doing any work in their life.

'Nowaday' should be 'nowadays'. 'They does not' is incorrect; it should be 'they do not' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. 'Going into the anxiety' is awkward; 'experience anxiety' is more natural. The correction fixes these errors.

× No, I do not judge do any kind of jobs.

✓ No, I do not do any kind of job.

'Judge do' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'do any kind of job'. Also, 'jobs' can be singular 'job' here for general statement. The correction fixes the verb usage and pronoun placement.

× I think I'm a patient now becauses the in childhood I was so aggressive child, so I mostly get angry in any kind of situation.

✓ I think I'm more patient now because in childhood I was a very aggressive child, so I used to get angry in any kind of situation.

'Becauses the in childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'because in childhood'. 'So aggressive child' needs an article 'a'. 'Mostly get angry' should be past tense 'used to get angry' to indicate past habit. The correction addresses these pronoun and tense issues.

× But nowadays I keep myself come in every kind of situation.

✓ But nowadays I keep myself calm in every kind of situation.

'Keep myself come' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep myself calm'. The correction fixes the pronoun and verb usage.

× Mostly I prefer to stay myself.

✓ Mostly I prefer to stay calm.

'Stay myself' is incorrect English. The correct expression is 'stay calm' or 'stay composed'. The correction replaces the incorrect phrase with a proper one.