Part 1
Examinador
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Candidato
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Examinador
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Candidato
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Examinador
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Candidato
Yeah, I often eat snacks when I was young and I usually have stomach ache.
Examinador
What snacks do you like to eat?
Candidato
I like to eat like popcorn, potato chips and cheesecake. Of course, my favorite is cola.
When do you usually eat snacks now?
Puntuación: 10.0Sugerencia: 你的回答没有回答考官的问题,而是重复了问题本身。建议直接回答问题,例如说明你通常什么时候吃零食,并简要说明原因。
Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I feel hungry between lunch and dinner.
Do you think it is healthy for you to eat snacks?
Puntuación: 10.0Sugerencia: 你的回答没有回答考官的问题,而是重复了问题本身。建议直接表达你对吃零食是否健康的看法,并给出理由。
Ejemplo: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy because many snacks contain a lot of sugar and fat.
Did you often eat snacks when you were young?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 你的回答有语法错误,时态使用不当。建议使用过去时态描述过去的习惯,并且可以补充更多细节。
Ejemplo: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, but sometimes I had stomach aches because I ate too much.
What snacks do you like to eat?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了喜欢的零食种类,但有些表达不够自然,例如“like to eat like”。建议简化表达并补充原因或喜好。
Ejemplo: I like to eat popcorn, potato chips, and cheesecake. Among them, my favorite is cola because it tastes refreshing.
× Yeah, I often eat snacks when I was young and I usually have stomach ache.
✓ Yeah, I often ate snacks when I was young and I usually had stomach ache.
句子中描述过去的习惯动作,应该使用过去时态。'eat'应改为'ate','have'应改为'had',以保持时态一致。
× I like to eat like popcorn, potato chips and cheesecake.
✓ I like to eat popcorn, potato chips and cheesecake.
'like'在此处重复使用,造成语法错误,应去掉第一个'like',直接列举喜欢的食物。