Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. For example, say "I usually eat snacks when I watch movies, but now I am on a diet, so I try to avoid them because they have many calories."

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks when I watch movies. However, since I am on a diet, I try to avoid snacks because they contain a lot of calories.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains contradictory statements. Make sure your sentences are clear and logically connected. Use linking words to explain your opinion. For example, "As I mentioned, I am on a diet and snacks have many calories, so I don't consider them healthy for me."

Ejemplo: As I mentioned, I am on a diet and snacks usually have many calories. Therefore, I don't think eating snacks is healthy for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer has repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repeating phrases. For example, "Yes, I used to eat many chips and unhealthy snacks when I was young because I didn't understand their impact on my health."

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to eat a lot of chips and other unhealthy snacks when I was young because I didn't understand how they could affect my health.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state what snacks you like and why. Use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, "I like to eat affordable snacks that I can find in almost every shop because they taste good and there are many options."

Ejemplo: I like to eat affordable snacks that are available in almost every shop. They taste good and come in many varieties.

× When I'm about to watch a movie because snacks has lots of calories and now I am going to tear on a diet so because of it I don't want to eat snacks really often.

✓ When I'm about to watch a movie because snacks have lots of calories and now I am going to start a diet so because of it I don't want to eat snacks really often.

The word 'snacks' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'tear on a diet' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'start a diet'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper phrase usage.

× Mentioned before, I am on a diet and I have lots of calories, so because of it I cannot consider snacks as a healthy product for me. And of course it is healthy for me to.

✓ As I mentioned before, I am on a diet and I consume a lot of calories, so because of that I cannot consider snacks as a healthy product for me. And of course, it is not healthy for me to eat them.

The original sentence misuses modal verbs and has unclear phrasing. 'Cannot consider' is acceptable but the sentence lacks clarity. Also, 'it is healthy for me to' is incomplete and contradictory. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects modal verb usage.

× Yes, I used to eat lots of chips and other unhealthy products when I was young because I didn't understand the impact of this of these products to my body. And now I and now I have that.

✓ Yes, I used to eat lots of chips and other unhealthy products when I was young because I didn't understand the impact of these products on my body. And now I understand that.

The phrase 'this of these' is incorrect; 'these' is correct for plural. Also, 'impact of these products to my body' should be 'impact of these products on my body'. The phrase 'And now I and now I have that' is unclear and corrected to 'And now I understand that.' This fixes past tense and preposition errors.

× Cheapest departments on the average ship and I can get them in every single shop and the they taste really good and they have various of options.

✓ The cheapest snacks are available in every single shop, and they taste really good and have various options.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect words like 'departments' and 'ship' which seem to be errors for 'snacks' and 'shop'. Also, 'various of options' is incorrect; it should be 'various options'. The correction addresses plural issues and word choice for clarity.