Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "I usually eat snacks in the evening after coming from the office because I feel exhausted and hungry. Therefore, I prefer to have light or medium snacks and sometimes skip dinner."

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks in the evening after coming from the office because I feel exhausted and hungry. Therefore, I prefer to have light or medium snacks and sometimes skip dinner.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has some unclear phrases and repetition. Try to use clearer sentences and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' to contrast ideas. For example, "It depends on the choice of snacks. If you eat oily snacks like samosas or momos, they are unhealthy. However, healthy options like sprouts or salads are beneficial."

Ejemplo: It depends on the choice of snacks. If you eat oily snacks like samosas or momos, they are unhealthy. However, healthy options like sprouts or salads are beneficial.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, during my childhood, we often had snacks. At school, we usually bought snacks from vendors outside or the canteen, and we always enjoyed them."

Ejemplo: Yes, during my childhood, we often had snacks. At school, we usually bought snacks from vendors outside or the canteen, and we always enjoyed them.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows your preferences but has repetition and unclear phrases. Try to be more organized and avoid repeating words. For example, "My favorite snacks are popcorn and anything made from corn, such as sweet corn, boiled corn, or cornflakes."

Ejemplo: My favorite snacks are popcorn and anything made from corn, such as sweet corn, boiled corn, or cornflakes.

× I usually eat snacks in evening after coming from office.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the evening after coming from the office.

The word 'evening' and 'office' need definite articles 'the' because they refer to specific times and places. In English, we say 'in the evening' and 'from the office' to indicate specific contexts.

× At that time I feel so much exhausted and hungry so that is my time of having snacks and after that I prefer to skip my dinner as well because after having light or sometimes medium snacks it feels feels it it.

✓ At that time, I feel very exhausted and hungry, so that is when I have my snacks. After that, I prefer to skip my dinner because after having light or sometimes medium snacks, I feel full.

The original sentence is long and confusing with repeated words and unclear structure. Breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity. Also, 'so much exhausted' is incorrect; 'very exhausted' is appropriate. The phrase 'time of having snacks' is better expressed as 'when I have my snacks.' The repeated words 'feels feels it it' are errors and should be removed. The sentence needs proper punctuation and clearer expression.

× If you are having snacks full of oil like samosa, momos or any street food that will not be healthy for you.

✓ If you have snacks full of oil like samosas, momos, or any street food, that will not be healthy for you.

The phrase 'are having' is less appropriate here; 'have' is better for general statements. Also, 'samosa' should be plural 'samosas' to match the list. The sentence is a conditional statement about general truth, so simple present tense is preferred.

× My favorite snacks are popcorns or anything made-up of corn.

✓ My favorite snacks are popcorn or anything made of corn.

'Popcorn' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form 'popcorns.' Also, 'made-up of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'made of.'

× I love popcorns or I I would like to have boiled corns or cornflakes also.

✓ I love popcorn, and I would also like to have boiled corn or cornflakes.

Again, 'popcorns' and 'corns' are incorrect plural forms; 'popcorn' and 'corn' are uncountable nouns. The sentence also needs proper conjunctions and word order for clarity. 'Also' is better placed before the verb phrase as 'would also like.'