Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni uttor ta spostho o sohoje bujhte paren emon vabe bolun. Proshner uttor shuru korun ekta spostho topic sentence diye, tarpor proyojone supporting details den. Linking words babohar korun jate kotha shongjog thake. Apnar uttor e kichu bhul ache, ja shudhu ekbar e bollen, ar sentence gulo onek confused. Apni chesta korun simple o clear sentence banate.

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks when I go outside with my family. For example, we often buy burgers to eat together. I don't eat snacks very often, only sometimes during outings.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e proshner uttor spostho ache kintu sentence gulo incomplete o confused. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor shuru korte ekta spostho topic sentence diye, tarpor karon o udahoron diye uttor ta bistarito korun. Linking words babohar korun jate kotha shongjog thake.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because many snacks contain a lot of fat and sugar. However, some snacks like nuts and fruits can be healthy options.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e onek bhul ache, ar sentence gulo onek confused. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor spostho o sohoje bujhte paren emon vabe bolte. Proshner uttor shuru korun ekta spostho topic sentence diye, tarpor supporting details den. Linking words babohar korun jate kotha shongjog thake.

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was young, I often ate snacks. For example, I used to eat snacks before going to school and sometimes when I visited fast food restaurants.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu bhul ache, ar sentence gulo onek confused. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor spostho o sohoje bujhte paren emon vabe bolte. Proshner uttor shuru korun ekta spostho topic sentence diye, tarpor supporting details den. Linking words babohar korun jate kotha shongjog thake. Apni jodi specific snacks er kotha bolen, seta aro bhalo hobe.

Ejemplo: I like to eat snacks such as pasta, burgers, nuts, and pizza. For example, I enjoy eating pizza because it tastes very good.

× Sometime I I don't usually snuck say sometimes I eat when I go to outside in my family like a burger.

✓ Sometimes I don't usually eat snacks, but sometimes I eat when I go outside with my family, like a burger.

The sentence has multiple tense and word choice errors. 'Snuck' is past tense and incorrect here; 'eat' is the correct present tense verb. 'Go to outside' is incorrect; it should be 'go outside'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs reordering for clarity. Use 'sometimes' at the start and correct verb forms to express habitual actions in present tense.

× Sometime I I don't usually snuck say sometimes I eat when I go to outside in my family like a burger.

✓ Sometimes I don't usually eat snacks, but sometimes I eat when I go outside with my family, like a burger.

The phrase 'go to outside' is incorrect; 'outside' is an adverb and does not need the preposition 'to'. The correct phrase is 'go outside'. Also, 'in my family' should be 'with my family' to indicate accompaniment.

× No, it is not healthy. It is very unhealthy food because it is a very fat and food because some snacks are healthy and.

✓ No, it is not healthy. It is very fatty food, but some snacks are healthy.

'Very fat and food' is incorrect; 'fat' is an adjective but needs to be 'fatty' to describe food. The sentence is also incomplete and redundant. Simplify and correct adjective usage to 'very fatty food' and clarify the contrast with healthy snacks.

× Yes Sir when I young do I regularly eat sucks because I want to go school and have time and when I go to a fast food when I eat.

✓ Yes, sir. When I was young, I regularly ate snacks because I wanted to go to school and had time, and when I went to a fast food place, I ate.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'young' needs 'was' for past tense; 'do I regularly eat' should be 'I regularly ate'; 'want' should be 'wanted'; 'go to school' needs 'to'; 'go to a fast food' should be 'went to a fast food place'. Correct past tense verbs and sentence structure are necessary for clarity.

× Yes Sir when I young do I regularly eat sucks because I want to go school and have time and when I go to a fast food when I eat.

✓ Yes, sir. When I was young, I regularly ate snacks because I wanted to go to school and had time, and when I went to a fast food place, I ate.

The phrase 'go to school' is missing the preposition 'to' after 'go'. Also, 'go to a fast food' is incomplete; it should be 'go to a fast food place' or 'fast food restaurant' for clarity.

× And actually I ate like. Pasta, burger and nuts and pizza. San Luis is a very tasty and I like it.

✓ Actually, I like to eat pasta, burgers, nuts, and pizza. San Luis is very tasty, and I like it.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'ate' when talking about preferences, which should be present tense 'like to eat'. Also, 'burger' should be plural 'burgers' to match the list. The sentence 'San Luis is a very tasty' is incomplete; it should be 'San Luis is very tasty'. The pronoun 'it' correctly refers to 'San Luis'.