Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit bhanne tarikale angreji prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le sentence haru lai thulo ra spashta banau, ra dohrayeko kura haru hataunu parcha. Udaharan ko lagi, tapai le 'after the work I arrived in my home' ko sato 'after I arrive home from work' bhanera bhannu saknuhunchha.

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks in the morning and also after I arrive home from work. Eating snacks helps me to stay energized and complete my tasks effectively.

Sugerencia: Tapai le angreji ma thik shabda ra vyakaran prayog garnu parcha. 'Hell obviously healthy' jasto galat prayog hataunu parcha ra thik shabda jastai 'definitely healthy' prayog garnu parcha. Arko kura, tapai le sentence haru lai thulo ra spashta banau, jasma linking words pani samet hunuparcha.

Ejemplo: If the snacks are fresh vegetables, fresh foods, or homemade, they are definitely healthy. They help me stay active and nourish my body, which can prevent various diseases.

Sugerencia: Tapai le angreji ma sentence haru lai thulo ra spashta banau, ra galti haru jastai 'eat' ko sato 'ate' prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le sentence haru ma linking words jastai 'and' ra 'because' prayog garera kura lai ramro sanga jodne prayas garnu parcha.

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was young, I usually ate snacks in the morning. After completing my college, I still eat snacks like apples because they help me focus on my studies.

Sugerencia: Tapai le angreji ma shabda haru ko thik prayog garnu parcha. 'Dragon foods' ko sato 'dragon fruit' bhanne thik shabda prayog garnu parcha. Arko kura, tapai le sentence haru lai thulo ra spashta banau ra linking words prayog garnu parcha.

Ejemplo: I love eating apples, grapes, and dragon fruit. These are my favorite snacks because they give me energy for my studies and help me concentrate better.

× I usually eat snacks in the morning and after the work I arrived in my home, then I eat snacks.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the morning and after I arrive home, then I eat snacks.

The phrase 'I arrived in my home' incorrectly uses past tense 'arrived' when the context requires present tense 'arrive' to match 'usually eat'. Also, 'after the work' is incorrect; it should be 'after I arrive home' to indicate the time when snacks are eaten.

× I usually eat snacks in the morning and after the work I arrived in my home, then I eat snacks.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the morning and after I arrive home, then I eat snacks.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'my home'. The correct preposition is omitted here; we say 'arrive home' without 'in'.

× It helps me to energize my time and it helps me do some work, to do some work and.

✓ It helps me to energize my time and helps me to do some work.

The sentence ends with an incomplete conjunction 'and' and repeats 'to do some work'. The correction removes redundancy and completes the sentence properly.

× If it is fresh vegetables, fresh foods or homemade food, it is hell obviously healthy.

✓ If they are fresh vegetables, fresh foods, or homemade food, they are obviously healthy.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used for plural nouns 'vegetables' and 'foods'. The correct pronoun is 'they' to agree in number.

× If it is fresh vegetables, fresh foods or homemade food, it is hell obviously healthy.

✓ If they are fresh vegetables, fresh foods, or homemade food, they are obviously healthy.

The word 'hell' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'hella' in slang or omitted. The correct adverb is 'obviously' placed before 'healthy'. The correction removes 'hell' for formal correctness.

× It helps me to stay active and to feed our body to prevent from different kind of diseases.

✓ It helps me to stay active and to nourish our body to prevent different kinds of diseases.

The phrase 'prevent from different kind of diseases' is incorrect. The verb 'prevent' does not require 'from'. Also, 'feed our body' is better expressed as 'nourish our body'. 'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' to match 'different'.

× Yes, when I was young I usually eat snacks in morning and and after my completing my college these days there are lots of things to eat to help me to focus my story.

✓ Yes, when I was young I usually ate snacks in the morning, and after completing my college, these days there are lots of things to eat to help me focus on my studies.

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match 'when I was young'. 'In morning' needs the article 'the morning'. 'After my completing my college' is incorrect; it should be 'after completing my college'. 'Focus my story' is incorrect; it should be 'focus on my studies'.

× The things of snacks are apple.

✓ The snacks are apples.

'The things of snacks' is awkward and incorrect; 'snacks' is plural. 'Apple' should be plural 'apples' to agree with plural subject.

× I love apple and grapes and dragon foods.

✓ I love apples, grapes, and dragon fruit.

'Apple' should be plural 'apples' to match 'grapes'. 'Dragon foods' is incorrect; the correct term is 'dragon fruit'.

× It uh, it is my favorite things.

✓ They are my favorite things.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to multiple items; the correct pronoun is 'they'.

× It helps me to create all energy for my study and this is my all time favorite.

✓ It helps me to generate energy for my studies, and this is my all-time favorite.

'Create all energy' is awkward; 'generate energy' is better. 'Study' should be plural 'studies'. 'All time favorite' should be hyphenated as 'all-time favorite'.