Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but a bit lengthy and lacks clear linking words. Try to keep your response within 5 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy such as repeating 'snacks' multiple times unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks twice a day, once around 10 AM and again at 3 PM because there is a long gap between breakfast and lunch. So, I feel hungry during these times and prefer to have something light to eat.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain your reason using linking words like 'because' or 'as'. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'I wouldn't agree with that one' and be more specific.

Ejemplo: I don't think eating snacks regularly is healthy because I only eat them when I am at the office. If I were at home, I would avoid snacks as they may harm our health if consumed often.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct tense and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons. Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to eat snacks frequently when I was young because my body was still growing. To satisfy my hunger, I had snacks almost every hour.

Sugerencia: Your answer lists snacks but could be more natural and coherent. Use linking words like 'such as' or 'for example' to list items. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'grabbed the snacks' and use 'prefer' instead of 'wouldn't prefer' for clarity.

Ejemplo: I like to eat snacks that are prepared quickly, such as chicken sandwiches, veg puffs, and curry puffs. However, I prefer to avoid oily fried items like noodles or manchurian because they contain many ingredients.

× I usually eat snacks twice a day, once in the morning around 10 AM and again in the afternoon around 3 PMI do this because there is a long gap between the breakfast and the lunch, so I often feel quite hungry during these times.

✓ I usually eat snacks twice a day, once in the morning around 10 AM and again in the afternoon around 3 PM. I do this because there is a long gap between breakfast and lunch, so I often feel quite hungry during these times.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation between independent clauses. Adding a period separates the ideas clearly. Also, 'the breakfast' and 'the lunch' are incorrect; meals like breakfast and lunch generally do not take the definite article 'the' in English.

× I usually eat snacks twice a day, once in the morning around 10 AM and again in the afternoon around 3 PMI do this because there is a long gap between the breakfast and the lunch, so I often feel quite hungry during these times.

✓ I usually eat snacks twice a day, once in the morning around 10 AM and again in the afternoon around 3 PM. I do this because there is a long gap between breakfast and lunch, so I often feel quite hungry during these times.

In English, meals like breakfast and lunch are uncountable nouns and do not require the definite article 'the' before them unless specifying a particular instance. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I wouldn't agree with that one. I'm eating snacks only because I'm going to office.

✓ I wouldn't agree with that one. I eat snacks only because I go to the office.

The use of 'I'm eating' (present continuous) is inappropriate here because the statement refers to a habitual action. Also, 'going to office' is missing the article 'the' before 'office'. The corrected sentence uses simple present tense to indicate habitual action and includes the definite article.

× I'm eating snacks only because I'm going to office.

✓ I eat snacks only because I go to the office.

In English, 'office' as a workplace requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect.

× If I was staying in the house I wouldn't eat and rather suggest to anyone because regularly having snacks may not be good for our health.

✓ If I were staying in the house, I wouldn't eat and would rather suggest to anyone that regularly having snacks may not be good for our health.

The conditional sentence requires the subjunctive mood 'were' instead of 'was' for hypothetical situations. Also, 'would rather suggest to anyone' needs 'would' before 'rather' and 'that' to introduce the clause. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy.

× If I was staying in the house I wouldn't eat and rather suggest to anyone because regularly having snacks may not be good for our health.

✓ If I were staying in the house, I wouldn't eat and would rather suggest to anyone that regularly having snacks may not be good for our health.

The phrase 'suggest to anyone' is incomplete; the verb 'suggest' is usually followed by a direct object and a clause introduced by 'that'. Adding 'would' before 'rather' and 'that' after 'suggest' corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, when I was young I was often eating snacks for hourly because in in my young age, our body will be slowly growing right developing.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I often ate snacks hourly because in my young age, our body was slowly growing and developing.

The past continuous 'was often eating' is less appropriate here than simple past 'often ate' for habitual past actions. 'For hourly' is incorrect; 'hourly' is an adverb and does not need 'for'. Also, 'will be slowly growing' should be past tense 'was slowly growing' to match the past context.

× Yes, when I was young I was often eating snacks for hourly because in in my young age, our body will be slowly growing right developing.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I often ate snacks hourly because in my young age, our body was slowly growing and developing.

The phrase 'for hourly' is incorrect; 'hourly' is an adverb and should be used without 'for'. Also, 'right developing' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'and' to connect 'growing' and 'developing'.

× Yes, when I was young I was often eating snacks for hourly because in in my young age, our body will be slowly growing right developing.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I often ate snacks hourly because in my young age, our body was slowly growing and developing.

The word 'right' is incorrectly used as a conjunction here; the correct conjunction to connect two verbs is 'and'.

× In order to beat my hungriest, I used to have snacks on hourly basis.

✓ In order to beat my hunger, I used to have snacks on an hourly basis.

'Hungriest' is a superlative adjective and incorrect here; the noun 'hunger' is appropriate. Also, 'on hourly basis' requires the article 'an' before 'hourly basis'.

× I grabbed the snacks which are prepared very quickly like with sandwich, chicken sandwich, addition to that, veg puffs and Curry puffs.

✓ I grab snacks that are prepared very quickly, like sandwiches, chicken sandwiches, and in addition to that, veg puffs and curry puffs.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency ('grabbed' past tense vs present context), incorrect article usage ('with sandwich'), and awkward phrasing. Changing to present tense 'grab', using plural forms for countable nouns, and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× I grabbed the snacks which are prepared very quickly like with sandwich, chicken sandwich, addition to that, veg puffs and Curry puffs.

✓ I grab snacks that are prepared very quickly, like sandwiches, chicken sandwiches, and in addition to that, veg puffs and curry puffs.

The phrase 'like with sandwich' is incorrect; 'like sandwiches' is correct. Also, 'addition to that' should be 'in addition to that' to be grammatically correct.

× I wouldn't prefer oil fried items like noodles, manchuria or any kind of other foods which are added by various ingredients.

✓ I wouldn't prefer oil-fried items like noodles, Manchurian, or any other kinds of food which have various ingredients added.

'Oil fried' should be hyphenated as 'oil-fried' to form a compound adjective. 'Manchuria' is a place name; the correct food name is 'Manchurian'. 'Any kind of other foods' is awkward; 'any other kinds of food' is better. Also, 'which are added by various ingredients' is passive and awkward; 'which have various ingredients added' is clearer.