Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to start with a direct response to the question, then add supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy.

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks between 4:00 PM and 5:00 PM because it helps me feel refreshed. This also prevents me from feeling too hungry before dinner, so I can enjoy my meal more.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'however' properly, and avoid unclear phrases. Also, try to use relevant vocabulary correctly and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I think it depends on the type of snacks. For example, I usually eat healthy snacks like nuts and fruits to maintain my fitness. However, some people may choose unhealthy options, which can be harmful.

Sugerencia: Try to make your sentences grammatically correct and more natural. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'in between that Asian timings'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I used to eat a lot of chocolate because it helped me quickly boost my energy while studying for exams. So, it was very helpful during that time.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' properly. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy.

Ejemplo: I like to eat nuts and fruits because they are healthy and help me maintain my fitness. Moreover, they quickly boost my energy levels, which is important since I am an athletic person and need energy throughout the day.

× Are usually it's next between 4:00 PM and 5:00 PM and an evening time as a way to get refreshed and.

✓ I usually eat snacks between 4:00 PM and 5:00 PM in the evening as a way to get refreshed.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words, making it confusing. The subject 'I' should come first, followed by the verb 'usually eat'. The phrase 'next between' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'between'. Also, 'and an evening time' is awkward; 'in the evening' is the correct prepositional phrase. The sentence should be concise and clear.

× Just to come that feeling of hunger so that I can eat a lot more at the dinner time.

✓ I eat snacks to curb my hunger so that I can eat more at dinner time.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Just to come that feeling of hunger' is incorrect; the intended meaning is to reduce hunger. Using 'curb my hunger' is clearer. Also, 'eat a lot more at the dinner time' should be 'eat more at dinner time' for natural phrasing.

× From my perspective, I often ate healthy snacks such as some notes.

✓ From my perspective, I often eat healthy snacks such as nuts.

The question is about current habits, so present tense 'eat' is appropriate instead of past tense 'ate'. Also, 'notes' is a typo and should be 'nuts'.

× Or or chain between so that I can maintain my fitness.

✓ Or chia seeds so that I can maintain my fitness.

The phrase 'Or or chain between' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. It should be 'Or chia seeds', which makes sense as a healthy snack. The sentence is incomplete and needs correction for clarity.

× Yes, I did it a lot of snacks when I was young.

✓ Yes, I ate a lot of snacks when I was young.

The phrase 'I did it a lot of snacks' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'ate' to describe consuming snacks in the past. 'Did it' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× I used to eat a lot of chocolate in between that Asian timings 'cause I want to quickly boost my energy levels as I was studying harder and preparing for my examination.

✓ I used to eat a lot of chocolate between those Asian timings because I wanted to quickly boost my energy levels while I was studying hard and preparing for my examinations.

The phrase 'in between that Asian timings' is incorrect; 'between those Asian timings' is correct. 'Cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formality. 'I want' should be past tense 'I wanted' to match the past context. 'Studying harder' should be 'studying hard'. 'Examination' should be plural 'examinations' if referring to multiple exams.

× I like to eat nuts and fruits because I find them as a healthy snack and they help me maintain my fitness and moreover they quickly boost my energy levels.

✓ I like to eat nuts and fruits because I find them healthy snacks; they help me maintain my fitness and quickly boost my energy levels.

The phrase 'find them as a healthy snack' is incorrect; it should be 'find them healthy snacks'. The sentence is long and can be improved by using a semicolon to separate ideas. 'Moreover' is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother flow.

× So they are perfect for me as I'm in athletic person and.

✓ So they are perfect for me as I'm an athletic person and I need a lot of energy during work.

The phrase 'I'm in athletic person and.' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'I'm an athletic person and I need a lot of energy during work.' The article 'an' is needed before 'athletic person'. The sentence needs completion for clarity.