Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma English prayog thik cha tara sentence haru adhura ra asamarthit chan. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra sentence haru lai spashta ra puryaunu parcha. Linking words jastai 'because', 'so' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau. 5 sentence bhitra ramro ra spashta uttar dinu parcha.

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks when I am free, especially during holidays. I love eating snacks like chips because they are delicious and refreshing. However, I try not to eat too many because I want to stay healthy.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra shabda prayog ma sudhar garna parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra karan haru spashta ra sanga jodne linking words prayog garnu parcha. English ma 'because', 'so' jasta shabda prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain too much fat and sugar. Also, some snacks may have preservatives that are not good for our body. So, I try to avoid eating unhealthy snacks.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma sentence structure ra clarity ma sudhar garna parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra supporting details lai linking words sanga jodne prayas garnu parcha. English ma 'after', 'but' jasta shabda prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I often ate snacks like pizza after dinner. However, I realized that eating too many snacks is not good for my health. So now, I try to avoid eating snacks frequently.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma vocabulary ra sentence structure ma sudhar garna parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra snacks ko naam haru clearly ra sahi tarikale bolnu parcha. Linking words jastai 'and', 'sometimes' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau.

Ejemplo: I like to eat snacks such as French fries, pizza, and burgers. Sometimes, I also enjoy eating fried snacks like samosas. These are my favorite types of snacks.

× When I got free and.

✓ When I get free.

The question is about usual habits, so present tense should be used instead of past tense. 'Got' is past tense; 'get' is correct for habitual actions.

× I usually eat snack.

✓ I usually eat snacks.

The noun 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' when referring to snacks in general.

× And I love to eat this next because it is so delicious and my more it gives me phrase.

✓ And I love to eat this snack because it is so delicious and it gives me energy.

The sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Next' should be 'snack'. 'My more it gives me phrase' is incorrect; likely intended to say 'it gives me energy' or similar.

× And the dislike very good, so this way I usually it.

✓ I really like it, so I usually eat it this way.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to express liking and habitual action clearly.

× No, it is good for it is not good for our health because there is too much Whaley.

✓ No, it is not good for our health because it has too much oil.

'It is good for it is not good' is contradictory and incorrect. 'Whaley' is likely a mispronunciation of 'oil' or 'fat'. Pronouns and meaning corrected.

× And here they put us some hygienic Marcela.

✓ And they put some harmful chemicals in it.

The phrase is unclear and incorrect. 'Hygienic Marcela' is likely a mishearing or mispronunciation. Corrected to a meaningful phrase.

× So that's why I think some this next we. Is next is not good for our health, it is ample our help.

✓ So that's why I think snacks are not good for our health; they harm our health.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Corrected to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Many times I I usually it is next when I have done my dinner after I.

✓ Many times I usually eat snacks after I have finished my dinner.

Incorrect word order and tense. 'It is next' should be 'eat snacks'. Corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Pizza is next and when I realized it is not good for health so this time I'm not it is tag.

✓ Pizza is a snack, but when I realized it is not good for health, I stopped eating it.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I like to eat a. Up Prince fry and sometimes I you I eat pizza, burger, this types of food I like the most.

✓ I like to eat French fries, and sometimes I eat pizza and burgers; these types of food I like the most.

Incorrect article usage and plural forms. 'a. Up Prince fry' is likely 'French fries'. Corrected for clarity and grammar.