Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid unnecessary pauses and fragmented sentences. Also, try to connect your ideas smoothly using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks between breakfast and lunch. Recently, I've become more health-conscious, so I prefer protein-rich snacks like a protein shake with a piece of fruit.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and completeness, especially in the last sentence. Try to avoid incomplete sentences and provide specific details with clear linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe eating snacks is healthy for me because I exercise regularly and aim to build muscle. Therefore, I choose protein-rich snacks to support muscle growth and meet my daily protein intake goals.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but try to use more linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases and be more concise.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't often eat snacks when I was young because chewing gum was not allowed at school. This rule probably helped me avoid unhealthy snacks like cookies and chips at that age.

Sugerencia: Your answer covers the question but could be more fluent and connected. Avoid short, fragmented sentences and use linking words to make your response more coherent.

Ejemplo: I enjoy a variety of snacks. During the day, I usually prefer salty snacks like kettle-cooked potato chips, but at night, I tend to choose sweet snacks such as cookies with milk.

× I usually eat snacks between my morning and my afternoon meal.

✓ I usually eat snacks between my morning and afternoon meals.

The preposition 'between' is used to indicate the space separating two things, so the objects should be plural or parallel. 'My morning and afternoon meals' is more natural and grammatically correct than 'my morning and my afternoon meal.'

× And I've also changed the type of snacks I eat because I'm more. Health conscious I'm my snacks are protein heavy.

✓ And I've also changed the type of snacks I eat because I'm more health conscious; my snacks are protein heavy.

The sentence has a misplaced pronoun 'I'm' and a period that breaks the sentence incorrectly. It should be two independent clauses connected properly. Also, 'health conscious' should not be separated by a period. Correct punctuation and pronoun usage improve clarity.

× Usually it's a protein shake. With. A piece of fruit.

✓ Usually, it's a protein shake with a piece of fruit.

The sentence is fragmented incorrectly with periods breaking the sentence unnaturally. Combining the fragments into one sentence with proper punctuation improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× Eating protein heavy snacks will help. Me get to my destination faster.

✓ Eating protein-heavy snacks will help me get to my destination faster.

The sentence is incorrectly split with a period after 'help,' causing a fragment. Also, 'protein heavy' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. Correcting these improves sentence flow and grammar.

× The average goal of protein consumption is a gram per.

✓ The average goal of protein consumption is a gram per kilogram of body weight.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the necessary prepositional phrase to clarify the measurement. Adding 'per kilogram of body weight' completes the thought and uses the preposition correctly.

× No, I don't remember eating snacks often when I was young because I was going to school and in school you couldn't even chew gum.

✓ No, I don't remember eating snacks often when I was young because I went to school and in school you couldn't even chew gum.

The phrase 'I was going to school' is less precise than 'I went to school' when referring to a habitual past action. Using simple past tense 'went' is more appropriate here.

× So I think that helped me. When I was young because at that age I would be eating cookies and chips instead of protein rich snacks.

✓ So I think that helped me when I was young because at that age I would eat cookies and chips instead of protein-rich snacks.

The phrase 'would be eating' suggests a continuous action, but here a habitual past action is intended, so 'would eat' is better. Also, 'protein rich' should be hyphenated as 'protein-rich.' The period after 'helped me' incorrectly breaks the sentence.

× Sometimes I like salty snacks like chips, potato chips, kettle cooked.

✓ Sometimes I like salty snacks like chips, potato chips, and kettle-cooked chips.

The phrase 'kettle cooked' is an adjective describing 'chips' and should be hyphenated as 'kettle-cooked.' Also, the list should be complete and parallel, so adding 'and' before the last item improves clarity.

× Other times I prefer. Sweet snacks like cookies and milk.

✓ Other times, I prefer sweet snacks like cookies and milk.

The period after 'prefer' incorrectly fragments the sentence. Removing the period and adding a comma after 'Other times' corrects the sentence structure.