Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence about current typical weather, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid irrelevant background information.

Ejemplo: I live in Tehran, where the weather varies a lot. For example, low-lying areas are usually hot and dry in summer, while the mountainous northern districts are cooler and often quite chilly in winter.

Sugerencia: Remove fillers and combine ideas smoothly: give a direct preference, then one clear reason using a linking word like "because". Correct small errors and keep to two sentences max.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because I often have cold feet and enjoy feeling the sun on my skin. This makes outdoor activities much more comfortable for me.

Sugerencia: Avoid fillers and unclear phrases: state preference clearly, give a specific supporting reason (avoid vague or incorrect phrases like "powering every day"), and finish the thought. Use linking words such as "because" or "since."

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because I grew up in a rainy city and enjoy the fresh smell and the sound of rain. For instance, rainy days make me feel calm and inspired.

Sugerencia: Answer the frequency and timing clearly, and provide a concise reason using correct word order and grammar. Avoid overly long explanations; state when/how often first, then the reason with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather app several times a day, usually in the morning and before going out. I do this because some friends live abroad and I like to know their local conditions and departure times.

Sugerencia: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar (tenses and plural forms). Provide two specific effects with brief explanations and linking words. Avoid listing without detail and correct vocabulary (e.g., "tidal waves" is informal—use "storm surges" or "coastal flooding").

Ejemplo: Climate change has increased the frequency and intensity of natural disasters. For example, warmer oceans lead to stronger hurricanes and higher sea levels cause more coastal flooding and erosion.

Sugerencia: Be more specific: give a direct yes/no answer and add one specific type of climate or city you want to visit with a reason, using a linking word to connect ideas. This makes the answer more informative and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit coastal cities with a maritime climate because I want to experience milder summers and enjoy seaside activities like swimming and boat trips.

× Some parts of Tehran is mountainous and can has quiet, chilly weather.

✓ Some parts of Tehran are mountainous and can have quite chilly weather.

Subject 'Some parts' is plural so use plural verb 'are' (singular and plural issue). 'Can has' is incorrect: modal 'can' must be followed by base verb 'have' (verb form error falling under singular/plural context here). 'Quiet' is wrong word; the correct adverb is 'quite' modifying the adjective 'chilly'. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and use base verb after modals; use 'quite' for degree adverb.

× I tend to prefer uh, hotter weather and because I personally always have a cold feet and I love the feeling of sunshine on my skin.

✓ I tend to prefer, uh, hotter weather because I personally always have cold feet and I love the feeling of sunshine on my skin.

Remove redundant 'and' after 'weather' and use 'cold feet' (no article) since 'feet' is plural (third person singular issue and article/quantifier choice). The clause starting with 'because' should connect directly; 'always have a cold feet' is ungrammatical: use 'always have cold feet'. Suggestion: omit unnecessary articles with body parts in plural and ensure connectors are placed correctly.

× Personally, I prefer wet weather, uh, 'cause I came from a very rainy city, uh, which is powering every day and uh, I love the sound of uh.

✓ Personally, I prefer wet weather because I come from a very rainy city, which rains every day, and I love the sound of rain.

'Came from' implies past origin; if speaker still originates from there or wants general fact, use present 'come from' or 'I'm from' (tense choice but here preposition 'from' is fine). The phrase 'which is powering every day' is incorrect; likely meant 'which rains every day' or 'where it rains every day' (incorrect use of verb and preposition). Also end phrase was incomplete; replace with 'sound of rain'. Suggestion: use 'because' instead of informal ' 'cause', use 'come from' for general background, and 'rains every day' or 'where it rains every day' for correct verb and preposition usage.

× I really do it because I have some friends that have immigrated and I love to check the app to know what conditions are they in and the time they're leaving.

✓ I really do because I have some friends who have immigrated, and I like to check the app to see what conditions they are in and when they're leaving.

'That' is acceptable for people but 'who' is more natural (pronoun choice). 'Do it' is vague; remove 'it'. Word order in indirect question should be 'see what conditions they are in' not 'what conditions are they in' (incorrect direct question word order used in statement). Use 'when' rather than 'the time' for natural timing expression. Suggestion: use 'who' for people, avoid unnecessary pronouns, and use statement word order after verbs like 'see'.

× It caused many natural disaster occurring regularly like hurricane, tidal waves and and tsunamis.

✓ It has caused many natural disasters to occur regularly, like hurricanes, tidal waves, and tsunamis.

Use present perfect 'has caused' to describe recent effects continuing to present. 'Natural disaster' should be plural 'natural disasters' (singular/plural). Add 'to occur' to link cause and occurrence. Also pluralize 'hurricane' to 'hurricanes' and fix duplicate 'and'. Suggestion: use correct tense for ongoing effects, pluralize countable nouns, and include infinitive 'to occur' for clarity.

× I would really like to visit new places.

✓ I would really like to visit new places.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It correctly expresses desire using 'would like' plus infinitive.