Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the sentence grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, give a specific temperature range, and avoid redundant phrases. Also use appropriate articles and contractions.

Ejemplo: It’s generally hot where I live in Malaysia, with temperatures usually around 27 to 30°C.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then briefly explain why with one or two specific reasons. Avoid repeated information and fix grammar (tense, prepositions, articles). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because I’m used to Malaysia’s climate; temperatures are typically 27–30°C, so I find it comfortable to be outdoors.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then clarify with specific reasons and correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like 'don't licking' and fix capitalization. Use linking words such as 'because' and give concrete examples of why humidity suits you.

Ejemplo: I don’t have a strong preference for dry or wet weather, but I prefer humid conditions because they’re mild—not too hot or cold—so I can walk outside comfortably without shivering or getting too sweaty.

Sugerencia: Keep the clear structure but make phrasing more natural and concise. Mention frequency more precisely and give a brief reason. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast most mornings and whenever I’m planning ahead for the next day, because it helps me organize my work and activities.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence summarizing key effects, then list two or three specific consequences with brief explanations. Improve grammar (plural/singular, articles) and use more accurate collocations like 'rising temperatures' and 'air pollution'.

Ejemplo: Climate change has caused rising temperatures, more frequent extreme heat, and sea level rise; it also worsens air pollution-related respiratory problems and contributes to habitat loss.

Sugerencia: State your answer directly, then give a specific reason or example. Make sentences concise and correct awkward phrasing like 'qualities of that city' and 'how people live in there'. Use linking words such as 'so that' correctly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would, because I want to experience different climates and see how people adapt—for example, visiting a snowy city to learn about winter lifestyles and clothing.

× I live in Malaysia and the weather's here is very hot which is 27 to 30°.

✓ I live in Malaysia and the weather here is very hot, around 27 to 30°C.

The original uses a redundant contraction 'weather's here is' which incorrectly combines 'there is' and a subject. Use 'the weather here is' or 'the weather here' without extra 'is'. Also include 'around' before a temperature range and use °C for clarity. Suggestion: simplify to 'the weather here is very hot, around 27 to 30°C.'

× I think I prefer hot weather because I live in Malaysia, which is the weather here is usually very hot.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I live in Malaysia, where the weather is usually very hot.

This sentence has an incorrect relative clause. 'Which is the weather here is' is ungrammatical. Use 'where' to refer to Malaysia and 'the weather is' for a clear clause. Also avoid repeating 'I think' unnecessarily. Suggestion: use 'where the weather is usually very hot.'

× So I already use with the temperatures around 27 to 30 Celsius.

✓ So I am used to temperatures around 27 to 30 degrees Celsius.

The phrase 'use with' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'be used to' meaning accustomed to. Also say 'degrees Celsius' and use the present continuous 'I am used to' or simple 'I am used to' for habit. Suggestion: 'I am used to temperatures around 27 to 30 degrees Celsius.'

× So I think it's more comfortable when you walking around with the weather that you used to.

✓ So I think it's more comfortable when you walk around in weather you are used to.

The original uses 'when you walking' (missing auxiliary) and awkward phrase 'with the weather that you used to.' Use simple present 'walk' for general statements and 'in weather you are used to' to express familiarity. Suggestion: 'when you walk around in weather you are used to.'

× I don't really prefer dry or wet weather, but I prefer it's humid, which is it Not really hot and it's not cold either because I can walk around, don't licking everywhere or don't feel shivering most of the time.

✓ I don't really prefer dry or wet weather; I prefer humid weather that is not very hot and not cold either because I can walk around without sweating or feeling cold most of the time.

Multiple issues: 'prefer it's humid' is incorrect—use 'I prefer humid weather.' 'Not really hot' should be 'not very hot.' 'Don't licking' is incorrect verb form; likely meant 'not sweating.' 'Don't feel shivering' should be 'not feeling cold' or 'not shivering.' Also use 'without' before activities to show absence. Suggestion: simplify and use 'humid weather... without sweating or feeling cold.'

× It makes my work easier and more organized.

✓ It makes my work easier and more organized.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Explanation: 'It makes' correctly uses third person singular present tense to describe a habitual effect.

× I often check it in the morning or when I plan something for the next day or the day after that.

✓ I often check it in the morning or when I plan something for the next day or the day after.

Original is acceptable, but 'the day after' is more natural than 'the day after that.' Suggestion: use 'the day after' for conciseness.

× I think the effects of climate change in recent years are including rising temperature, extreme hot weather and rising sea levels.

✓ I think the effects of climate change in recent years include rising temperatures, extremely hot weather, and rising sea levels.

Use 'include' rather than 'are including' for listing effects. Use plural 'temperatures' and adjective/adverb forms: 'extremely hot weather' rather than 'extreme hot weather.' Suggestion: 'include rising temperatures, extremely hot weather, and rising sea levels.'

× It also impacts human health, which is worsening the respiratory conditions because of air pollutions, and it also makes habitat loss.

✓ It also affects human health by worsening respiratory conditions because of air pollution, and it also causes habitat loss.

Use 'affects' or 'impacts' directly; 'which is worsening the respiratory conditions' is awkward. 'Air pollutions' should be 'air pollution' (uncountable). 'Makes habitat loss' is incorrect; use 'causes habitat loss.' Suggestion: 'affects human health by worsening respiratory conditions because of air pollution, and causes habitat loss.'

× Yes, I think I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live so that I can explore and know what the qualities of that city and know how people live in there.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities with climates different from mine so that I can explore, learn about the qualities of those cities, and see how people live there.

Use 'with climates different from mine' rather than 'that have different climates from where I live.' 'Know what the qualities of that city' is ungrammatical; use 'learn about the qualities of those cities.' 'Know how people live in there' should be 'see how people live there.' Also pluralize 'cities' consistently. Suggestion: simplify and use 'visit other cities with climates different from mine... learn about the qualities of those cities and see how people live there.'