Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá ngắn và thiếu sự liên kết tự nhiên. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách sử dụng các từ nối và mô tả cụ thể hơn về thời tiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: I live in a tropical climate, so the weather is usually hot and humid throughout the year. For instance, during the summer months, temperatures often rise above 30 degrees Celsius, making it quite warm.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp và có cung cấp lý do, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm ví dụ cụ thể.

Ejemplo: I enjoy cold weather because it feels refreshing and comfortable. Moreover, I don't like hot and humid summers since they make me feel tired. For example, I love winter because I was born during that season.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi về logic và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'clothes can dry faster in wet weather' là không hợp lý. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because clothes dry faster and it's more comfortable. Also, since my skin tends to be oily, wet weather makes me feel sticky and uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên chú ý tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day to prepare for the next day. For example, if it is going to rain tomorrow, I make sure to bring a raincoat with me.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

Ejemplo: The world is strongly affected by climate change. For example, in recent years, the average temperature during summer has been higher than in the past, leading to more heatwaves.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ không chính xác. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu đúng, đồng thời tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'umm'.

Ejemplo: Of course, I would love to visit other cities with different climates. For example, the central region of Vietnam is known for its cooler weather, so I hope to visit there one day.

× I live in tropical climate weather so it's usually hot and humid.

✓ I live in a tropical climate, so it's usually hot and humid.

The phrase 'tropical climate weather' is incorrect because 'climate' is singular and needs an article 'a'. Also, 'weather' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'a tropical climate'.

× Uh, I would prefer dry weather because the clothes can dry faster in wet weather.

✓ Uh, I prefer dry weather because clothes dry faster in dry weather.

Using 'would prefer' suggests a hypothetical situation, but the student is stating a general preference, so 'prefer' is more appropriate. Also, 'the clothes' is incorrect; 'clothes' is a plural noun used without 'the' in general statements.

× My skin produced a lot of oil so I don't like wet weather.

✓ My skin produces a lot of oil, so I don't like wet weather.

The verb tense should be present simple 'produces' to indicate a habitual action. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× I watch weather forecast show every day to to make sure I bring necessary items when I go out in the next day.

✓ I watch the weather forecast show every day to make sure I bring necessary items when I go out the next day.

The phrase 'weather forecast show' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'in the next day' is incorrect; it should be 'the next day'. The repeated 'to' is a typo and should be removed.

× The global are under strong influence of climate change.

✓ The globe is under strong influence of climate change.

'Global' is an adjective, not a noun. The correct noun is 'globe', which is singular and requires the singular verb 'is'.

× For example, in recent years, summer is the average temperature in summer is higher than the years in the past in summer in the past.

✓ For example, in recent years, the average temperature in summer has been higher than in past years.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and uses the present perfect tense to indicate a trend over recent years.

× Where I live is very humid and hot.

✓ Where I live, it is very humid and hot.

A comma and the pronoun 'it' are needed to form a complete sentence. 'Where I live' is a subordinate clause and needs a main clause following it.

× The middle of Vietnam is known for it cold weather, so I umm, love visit it one day.

✓ The middle of Vietnam is known for its cold weather, so I, umm, would love to visit it one day.

The possessive pronoun 'its' is needed instead of 'it'. Also, 'love visit' is incorrect; it should be 'would love to visit' to express desire. Commas are added for clarity.