Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly describe the current weather with clear and correct sentences, avoid unnecessary or confusing information, and keep it concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Currently, I live in Canada, and the weather is quite mild. It's windy these days, which makes the environment feel calm and relaxing. The temperature is neither too hot nor too cold, which I really enjoy.

Sugerencia: Your answer repeats ideas and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific reasons using linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to spend more time outdoors. In contrast, cold weather makes it difficult to enjoy outdoor activities. Therefore, I find hot weather more enjoyable and energizing.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some hesitation and tense inconsistency. Try to use present tense consistently and avoid filler words. Also, explain your preferences clearly with linking words to improve fluency.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because it makes me feel relaxed. Unlike dry weather, rainy days create a peaceful atmosphere. Additionally, I enjoy playing outside during the rainy season.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your habit and explain why you check the forecast, using correct grammar and logical sentence structure.

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because I work at a restaurant and need to plan my day accordingly. Usually, I check it in the morning before I get ready.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and repetition. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and avoid repeating words. Provide specific examples to support your points.

Ejemplo: In my home country, Punjab, climate change has caused severe floods in recent years. These floods have damaged many homes and affected people's lives badly.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains many filler words and awkward phrasing. Try to speak more fluently and clearly, using linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unnecessary pauses.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit other countries with different climates. For example, I want to visit India because I enjoy its weather. Besides that, I am also interested in visiting places like London and Australia.

× As currently I'm living in Canada and there is no the month of August so there is not too much cold or too much hot.

✓ Currently, I'm living in Canada and there is no month of August, so it is neither too cold nor too hot.

The phrase 'there is no the month of August' is incorrect because 'the' is unnecessary before 'month of August' and the sentence structure is awkward. Also, 'there is not too much cold or too much hot' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it is neither too cold nor too hot' to express the idea properly.

× This is the windy season and I like this calm and relaxing environment.

✓ This is the windy season, but I like this calm and relaxing environment.

The sentence contrasts 'windy' with 'calm', so using 'and' is incorrect. 'But' is the appropriate conjunction to show contrast between the windy season and the calm environment.

× Likely.

✓ I prefer hot weather.

The single word 'Likely' is not a proper response to the question 'Do you prefer cold or hot weather?'. A modal verb or a clear statement is needed. 'I prefer hot weather' is a clear and grammatically correct answer.

× ...because in cold weather it's very difficult to go outside and enjoying the environment.

✓ ...because in cold weather it's very difficult to go outside and enjoy the environment.

After 'to' (infinitive marker), the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. 'Enjoying' is incorrect here; it should be 'enjoy'.

× So I like the hot weather because we can go outside and enjoy the weather.

✓ So I like the hot weather because we can go outside and enjoy the weather.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I prefer wet weather because in dry weather I feel bored, but in wet weather when it was raining I feel very relaxed and I also, uh, wanted to play in wet weather like in a rainy season.

✓ I prefer wet weather because in dry weather I feel bored, but in wet weather when it is raining I feel very relaxed and I also want to play in wet weather like in the rainy season.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was raining' and 'wanted' with present tense 'feel'. To maintain consistency, present tense should be used: 'when it is raining' and 'I also want'.

× Yes, it's my daily routine to checking the weather forecast because as I am worked at the restaurant and I have to go on the daily basis.

✓ Yes, it's my daily routine to check the weather forecast because I work at a restaurant and I have to go daily.

After 'to', the base verb form 'check' should be used, not 'checking'. Also, 'as I am worked' is incorrect; it should be 'I work'. 'On the daily basis' is better expressed as 'daily'.

× So when I was. Getting ready After getting ready I was checked.

✓ So when I was getting ready, after getting ready, I checked.

The sentence is fragmented and uses passive voice incorrectly. 'I was checked' is incorrect here; it should be active voice 'I checked'. Also, the sentence needs proper punctuation and structure.

× If I talk about my home country, Punjab, so in recent year the climate change effects very badly because the flood is coming and my home country is totally damaged, homes are totally damaged.

✓ If I talk about my home country, Punjab, in recent years the effects of climate change have been very bad because floods are coming and my home country is totally damaged; homes are totally damaged.

'In recent year' should be plural 'in recent years'. 'The flood is coming' should be plural 'floods are coming' to match the context. 'Climate change effects' should be 'effects of climate change'. Also, 'very badly' should be 'very bad' as it describes 'effects' (noun).

× So it was so worst, worst.

✓ So it was so bad, very bad.

'Worst' is a superlative adjective and cannot be preceded by 'so'. The correct form is 'so bad' or 'very bad'.

× Yes, I like to visit in other countries, especially in India because I like the weather of my home country, uh, but far from that, uh, I also, uh, wanted to, uh, visit in other countries like London and Australia.

✓ Yes, I like to visit other countries, especially India because I like the weather of my home country, but apart from that, I also want to visit other countries like London and Australia.

The preposition 'in' after 'visit' is incorrect; 'visit' is used without 'in'. 'Far from that' should be 'apart from that'. Also, 'wanted' should be present tense 'want' to match the context.