Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use clearer and more accurate vocabulary to describe the weather, and avoid unclear words like 'sleazy' and 'dub'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and keep it concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: In the United Arab Emirates, the weather is extremely hot, often reaching around 40 degrees Celsius. This intense heat can make people feel uncomfortable and sometimes causes headaches.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer expressions. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide reasons to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because in the United Arab Emirates, it is hot almost all year round, so I rarely experience cold temperatures. Cold weather feels refreshing and comfortable to me.

Sugerencia: Clarify your ideas and avoid contradictory statements. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Be specific about why you prefer wet weather.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes my skin very dry and uncomfortable. Although dry air can make breathing easier, I find wet weather more soothing for my skin and overall comfort.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and clearly. Avoid vague expressions and incomplete sentences. Explain your habits and give reasons if possible.

Ejemplo: No, I am not in the habit of checking the weather forecast regularly. However, I know that some people in my culture do check it to plan their day.

Sugerencia: Use clearer and more precise language to describe the effects of climate change. Avoid unclear phrases like 'renewable at the same time'. Provide specific examples and link your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused higher temperatures and more frequent floods. These changes have negatively affected the weather patterns and the environment.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more fluent and coherent by using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your ideas. Provide more details about why you want to visit these places.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to go to Switzerland with my family to experience cold weather and enjoy the winter season. I also look forward to sharing this experience with my friends.

× And United Arab Emirates, the weather is extremely hot. It's like 40 sleazy and dub, and that's what's make us feel so hot, so headache.

✓ In the United Arab Emirates, the weather is extremely hot. It's like 40 degrees Celsius and humid, and that's what makes us feel so hot and gives us headaches.

The original sentence has incorrect verb form 'make' which should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. Also, 'sleazy and dub' seems to be a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'degrees Celsius and humid' to make sense. 'So headache' is incorrect; corrected to 'gives us headaches' to properly express the effect.

× And United Arab Emirates, the weather is extremely hot. It's like 40 sleazy and dub, and that's what's make us feel so hot, so headache.

✓ In the United Arab Emirates, the weather is extremely hot. It's like 40 degrees Celsius and humid, and that's what makes us feel so hot and gives us headaches.

The country name should be preceded by the definite article 'the' as 'the United Arab Emirates' because it is a federation of emirates. This is a standard usage for country names with plural or descriptive forms.

× I prefer cold because the most of all, not most, the all the time in United Arab Emirates the weather is extremely hot and there is no chance to feel cold in this culture. So I prefer cold. So it makes me so.

✓ I prefer cold because most of the time in the United Arab Emirates the weather is extremely hot and there is no chance to feel cold in this climate. So I prefer cold. It makes me feel better.

The phrase 'the most of all, not most, the all the time' is incorrect and confusing. Corrected to 'most of the time' which is the proper quantifier for frequency. Also, 'culture' is replaced with 'climate' as it refers to weather conditions. 'So it makes me so' is incomplete; corrected to 'It makes me feel better' for clarity.

× I prefer cold because the most of all, not most, the all the time in United Arab Emirates the weather is extremely hot and there is no chance to feel cold in this culture. So I prefer cold. So it makes me so.

✓ I prefer cold because most of the time in the United Arab Emirates the weather is extremely hot and there is no chance to feel cold in this climate. So I prefer cold. It makes me feel better.

Again, 'United Arab Emirates' should be preceded by 'the' as 'the United Arab Emirates'. This is standard for this country name.

× I prefer wet weather because the dry weather makes my skin very dry and I can breathe very well in this weather like in a dry weather. So I prefer wet weather for me as a personal.

✓ I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes my skin very dry and I cannot breathe well in dry weather. So I prefer wet weather personally.

The phrase 'in this weather like in a dry weather' is awkward and redundant. Corrected to 'in dry weather' for clarity. Also, 'for me as a personal' is incorrect; corrected to 'personally' which is the proper adverb form.

× No, I'm not in that habit of checking the weather forecast, but I think people could. My culture there is a people can have of checking weather forecasts, but when and how I don't know.

✓ No, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast, but I think people do. In my culture, people can check weather forecasts, but when and how, I don't know.

'People could' is incorrect; 'people do' is appropriate to express habitual action. 'My culture there is a people can have of checking' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'In my culture, people can check'. Also, 'in that habit' changed to 'in the habit' which is the correct expression.

× In recent years climate change has a a hotter temperature and cases of floods and a lot of things that could make the weather very bad and renewable at the same time.

✓ In recent years, climate change has caused higher temperatures, more cases of floods, and many other things that could make the weather very bad and unpredictable at the same time.

The original sentence lacks proper verb usage; 'has a a hotter temperature' is incorrect. Corrected to 'has caused higher temperatures'. Also, 'renewable' is incorrect in this context; replaced with 'unpredictable' to better express the intended meaning.

× Yes, I would like to visit other cities to have a different climate, like for a cold weather I would like to go to Switzerland with my family, of course, to have a good weather and winter. And I really love to share this with my friends to expand.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. For cold weather, I would like to go to Switzerland with my family, of course, to enjoy good weather and winter. I would also love to share this experience with my friends to broaden my horizons.

'To have a different climate' is better expressed as 'with different climates'. 'Like for a cold weather' is awkward; corrected to 'For cold weather'. 'To have a good weather and winter' is incorrect; corrected to 'to enjoy good weather and winter'. 'I really love to share this with my friends to expand' is unclear; clarified to 'share this experience with my friends to broaden my horizons'.