Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Try to directly describe the weather and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, explain the climate type and how people feel about it in a simple way.

Ejemplo: I live in Kathmandu, the capital of Nepal, where the climate is mostly monsoon. It is usually cold during the monsoon season, and many people prefer this cool weather.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding filler phrases and making it more concise. Use linking words to connect your reason and preference clearly.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy swimming in the summer, which is my hobby. Therefore, hot weather suits me best.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and be more specific about the problems you face in wet weather. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside and do daily activities without problems like getting wet or slippery roads.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to directly answer the question and explain when and how often you check the forecast. Use linking words to clarify your points.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going outside because the weather can change unexpectedly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and provide specific effects of climate change. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

Ejemplo: Global warming has increased in recent years, causing many problems. For example, animals and plants are losing their habitats, and humans face health and environmental challenges.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'That's it for today.' Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy exploring new places and experiencing various weather, which makes me feel peaceful.

× Actually I'm living in the capital city of this Nepal where the climate is monsoon.

✓ Actually, I live in the capital city of Nepal where the climate is monsoon.

In English, the present simple tense is used to describe permanent situations or facts, such as where someone lives. Using 'I'm living' (present continuous) suggests a temporary action, which is incorrect here.

× Actually I'm living in the capital city of this Nepal where the climate is monsoon.

✓ Actually, I live in the capital city of Nepal where the climate is monsoon.

The preposition 'of' before 'this Nepal' is incorrect. We say 'the capital city of Nepal' without 'this' in this context.

× We can find the weather is very cold, meaning like people prefer to live in the cold weather and in monsoon weather.

✓ The weather is very cold, which means people prefer to live in cold and monsoon weather.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Simplifying the structure and using 'which means' clarifies the meaning.

× Actually I prefer the dry weather because in the dry weather in the summer season, we don't have to face the lots of problems while while going outside the house.

✓ Actually, I prefer dry weather because in the summer season, we don't have to face many problems when going outside the house.

The phrase 'face the lots of problems' is incorrect; 'face many problems' is correct. Also, 'while while going outside' is repetitive and 'when going outside' is better.

× We have to take the weather because it is very necessary.

✓ We have to check the weather because it is very necessary.

The verb 'take' is incorrect here; the correct verb collocated with 'weather' is 'check' or 'look at' the weather forecast.

× We cannot say when the weather can be changed or not, so we have to always change the weather.

✓ We cannot say when the weather will change or not, so we always have to check the weather.

The phrase 'can be changed' is incorrect for natural weather changes; 'will change' is appropriate. Also, 'change the weather' is incorrect; people cannot change weather, they can only check or monitor it.

× As we all know that the global warming is increasing day by day in within the few years it has been increased so much.

✓ As we all know, global warming has been increasing day by day and has increased so much within the past few years.

The tense usage was inconsistent. Present perfect continuous 'has been increasing' and present perfect 'has increased' correctly describe ongoing and recent changes.

× Many animals, plants also as well as human beings are affected by it, people are.

✓ Many animals, plants, and human beings are affected by it.

The original sentence is incomplete and redundant. Simplifying it improves clarity and correctness.

× Actually, I love to go outside and explore new things and I want to experience all the climate over all the world, which makes me feel so peaceful.

✓ Actually, I love to go outside and explore new things, and I want to experience all the climates around the world, which makes me feel so peaceful.

The phrase 'all the climate over all the world' is incorrect. The plural 'climates' and the preposition 'around' are appropriate here.