Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using simpler sentence structures. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details. Avoid redundancy and incorrect prepositions.

Ejemplo: I live in a hilly area where winter is the most common season. The cold weather is very popular here because it suits the environment and the people prefer it.

Sugerencia: Use plural forms correctly and avoid awkward phrases. Link your ideas smoothly and provide clear reasons with examples. Keep sentences concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it is healthier. People find it easier to live in cold climates, while extreme heat can be difficult to tolerate.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable. Wet weather often causes people to catch illnesses, so many avoid it.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding unnecessary words. Use correct prepositions and plural forms. Link your ideas clearly and provide specific details about your habit.

Ejemplo: Yes, I regularly check the weather forecast because I find it interesting. I usually do this every Sunday during my free time to see the forecast for the next seven days.

Sugerencia: Clarify your ideas and use correct vocabulary. Explain the effects of climate change clearly with specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused many problems like global warming. This leads to rising temperatures and affects our environment negatively.

Sugerencia: Use plural forms and correct articles properly. Make your answer more natural by avoiding repetition and linking your ideas logically. Provide specific reasons for your preference.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it helps me experience various types of weather like summer, winter, autumn, and rainy seasons.

× In my locality there are winter weather is more popular because I am live in hilly area and the winter weather is most preferable in my area.

✓ In my locality, winter weather is more common because I live in a hilly area and winter weather is most preferable in my area.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'there are' followed by a noun phrase, which is ungrammatical. 'There are' is used to indicate existence of plural nouns, but here it is unnecessary. Also, 'I am live' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I live'. The sentence is corrected by removing 'there are' and fixing the verb form.

× I prefer cold weather because it is good for health. Individual easily survive in a cold weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it is good for health. Individuals easily survive in cold weather.

The word 'Individual' should be plural 'Individuals' to match the plural subject. Also, 'in a cold weather' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable here, so 'in cold weather' is correct.

× But opposite side most of individual do not survive in hot weather because of extreme heat.

✓ But on the opposite side, most individuals do not survive in hot weather because of extreme heat.

'Most of individual' is incorrect; it should be 'most individuals' to indicate plural. Also, 'But opposite side' needs the preposition 'on' to be correct.

× I prefer dry weather because dry weather is a good weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because dry weather is good weather.

'A good weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. The article is removed to correct the sentence.

× Individuals do not like wet weather because through wet they get infected by disease.

✓ Individuals do not like wet weather because through wetness they get infected by diseases.

The phrase 'through wet' is incorrect; it should be 'through wetness' or 'due to wet conditions'. Also, 'infected by disease' is better as 'infected by diseases' to indicate plural illnesses.

× I like to check the weather forecast on every Sunday because it is free time for me and I see the weather forecast of next seven day.

✓ I like to check the weather forecast every Sunday because it is free time for me and I see the weather forecast for the next seven days.

'On every Sunday' should be 'every Sunday' without 'on'. 'Of next seven day' should be 'for the next seven days' to be grammatically correct and pluralize 'day'.

× In recent years there are various kinds of changes in climate which effect the environment such as global warming is increased day by day due to water climate which is not good for our environment.

✓ In recent years, there have been various kinds of changes in climate which affect the environment, such as global warming increasing day by day due to water climate, which is not good for our environment.

'There are' is incorrect for past events; 'there have been' is correct for recent past. 'Effect' should be 'affect' as a verb meaning influence. 'Global warming is increased' should be 'global warming increasing' to indicate ongoing action.

× Yes, I would like to visit different city with different weather because it is good for me to visit different type of city and I like all type of weather such as summer weather, winter weather, autumn weather, rainy weather.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit different cities with different weather because it is good for me to visit different types of cities and I like all types of weather such as summer weather, winter weather, autumn weather, and rainy weather.

'Different city' should be plural 'different cities'. Similarly, 'different type of city' should be 'different types of cities'. 'All type of weather' should be 'all types of weather' to match plural usage.