Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear in some parts. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same ideas. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about the weather in different seasons.

Ejemplo: I live in Kathmandu, which is located in the central part of Nepal. The weather here is generally humid, but the temperature is quite pleasant. In winter, it is neither too hot nor too cold, making it comfortable to live in. Overall, the climate is mild and enjoyable throughout the year.

Sugerencia: Your answer repeats phrases and lacks variety in vocabulary. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, give specific reasons why you prefer cold weather.

Ejemplo: I mostly prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable for outdoor activities. When it's cold, I can enjoy sports like hiking and cycling without feeling too hot or tired.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but a bit incomplete and slightly unclear at the end. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to make your ideas flow better. Also, add more specific details about why you like wet weather.

Ejemplo: I mostly prefer wet weather because I find the rainy season very peaceful. When I am indoors watching the rain through the window, it creates a calm atmosphere. Additionally, I enjoy sleeping during rainy days as the sound of rain is soothing.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, clarify the frequency of checking the forecast.

Ejemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly. However, when I notice dark clouds and there is a chance of rain, I check it because I travel a long distance to work and want to avoid getting wet.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use more precise vocabulary and link your ideas logically. Also, explain the effects more specifically.

Ejemplo: Climate change has caused serious problems in Nepal recently. For example, we used to have plenty of rain, but now there are frequent droughts, which harm farmers and affect food production.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrases. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words. Also, use more accurate vocabulary to describe the climate and scenery.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates, especially in northern countries. They have snowy winters and beautiful natural scenery, which creates a cold and refreshing atmosphere. Experiencing such a climate would be very interesting for me.

× It is quite humid and it is quite nice temperature.

✓ It is quite humid and the temperature is quite nice.

The phrase 'nice temperature' needs a definite article 'the' before 'temperature' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'temperature' is a noun and requires an article here.

× Whenever we go out, it is not that temperature also and the temperature is not humid.

✓ Whenever we go out, the temperature is not like that and it is not humid.

The phrase 'not that temperature also' is incorrect. It should be 'not like that' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'temperature is not humid' is awkward; better to say 'it is not humid'.

× we could go outdoor and enjoy all the sports and activities that we can do in the outdoor.

✓ we could go outdoors and enjoy all the sports and activities that we can do outdoors.

The correct adverb is 'outdoors' not 'outdoor' when referring to going outside or doing activities outside.

× whenever you are indoor and looking the rain through the window is it is quite peaceful and I love to also sleep during the rainy season so.

✓ whenever I am indoors and looking at the rain through the window, it is quite peaceful and I also love to sleep during the rainy season.

The pronoun 'you' should be 'I' to match the speaker. 'Indoor' should be 'indoors' as an adverb. 'Looking the rain' should be 'looking at the rain'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I do not check the weather forecast often, but sometime whenever there is rain probability and whenever I see up in the sky and I see dark cloud and then I have this habit of checking it because I tend to go a long distance from my home to work so I do not get wet.

✓ I do not check the weather forecast often, but sometimes whenever there is a chance of rain and I see dark clouds in the sky, I have the habit of checking it because I tend to travel a long distance from my home to work so I do not get wet.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Rain probability' is better expressed as 'a chance of rain'. 'See up in the sky' is awkward; better to say 'see dark clouds in the sky'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, there has been a recent problem in the climate condition and this has been very much critical in my country, Nepal also because we tend to have a lot of rain previously but now it is all drought and it is basically hamping the farmer.

✓ Yes, there has been a recent problem with the climate conditions and this has been very critical in my country, Nepal, because we used to have a lot of rain previously but now there is drought and it is basically harming the farmers.

'Hamping' is a misspelling of 'harming'. 'Farmer' should be plural 'farmers'. 'Tend to have' is better as 'used to have' to indicate past habit. 'Climate condition' should be plural 'climate conditions'.

× They have this snow all day winter and they have this very beautiful conditions.

✓ They have snow all day during winter and they have very beautiful conditions.

'This snow all day winter' is incorrect; it should be 'snow all day during winter'. 'This very beautiful conditions' should be 'very beautiful conditions' without 'this'.

× So the climate condition is very far reaching as well as very chill and they kind of have this natural scenery that affects this temperature.

✓ So the climate conditions are very far-reaching as well as very chilly and they kind of have this natural scenery that affects the temperature.

'Climate condition' should be plural 'climate conditions'. 'Far reaching' should be hyphenated 'far-reaching'. 'Chill' as adjective should be 'chilly'. 'Affects this temperature' should be 'affects the temperature'.