Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more natural and clear. Try to start with a direct topic sentence about the weather, then add specific details without redundancy. Avoid vague phrases like 'so cozy' without explanation.

Ejemplo: I live in a humid climate, which feels quite comfortable, especially during the winter months when it becomes cozy and pleasant.

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like 'you know'.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it encourages me to stay indoors, enjoy cozy moments, and drink warm beverages, which I find very comforting.

Sugerencia: Avoid apologizing and try to give a clear, specific answer. Explain why you prefer wet weather with supporting details and use linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because it reminds me of my childhood and brings back many nostalgic memories, which makes me feel happy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be clearer and more concise. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I always check the weather forecast before going out because I want to avoid unexpected bad weather that could ruin my plans.

Sugerencia: Try to provide more specific effects of climate change and organize your answer with linking words. Avoid repeating words like 'everyone'.

Ejemplo: Climate change, mainly global warming, has caused severe weather events, rising sea levels, and threats to both humans and animals worldwide.

Sugerencia: Avoid apologizing and try to give a clear, direct answer. Explain your preference with reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer to stay in places with climates similar to my hometown because I feel more comfortable and familiar with that weather.

× So I live in the moist weather.

✓ So I live in a moist climate.

The phrase 'the moist weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take a definite article here. Also, 'moist weather' is uncommon; 'moist climate' or 'humid climate' is more appropriate. Use 'a' for countable singular nouns or no article for uncountable nouns when speaking generally.

× It's like so cozy and feel so better like winter.

✓ It's so cozy and feels much better in winter.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'feel' without subject agreement and 'so better' which is ungrammatical. 'Feel' should be 'feels' to agree with 'it'. 'So better' should be 'much better' or 'better'. Also, 'like winter' should be 'in winter' to indicate time.

× Of course, like I love cold weather 'cause it gives the warmth when we, you know, like inside the house being so cosy and sipping the hot drinks, you know, warm.

✓ Of course, I love cold weather because it gives warmth when we are inside the house being cozy and sipping hot drinks to keep warm.

The phrase 'like inside the house being so cosy' is incorrect; 'inside the house' should be followed by a clause with a verb. Also, 'the warmth' is unnecessary; 'warmth' is uncountable here. 'Sipping the hot drinks' should be 'sipping hot drinks' without 'the'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I prefer wet weather, it gives me the nostalgia from my everything.

✓ I prefer wet weather; it gives me nostalgia from everything in my life.

'The nostalgia' is incorrect because 'nostalgia' is uncountable and does not take 'the' here. 'From my everything' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'from everything in my life' or similar. Also, the comma should be a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses.

× So it's very important to check the further weather forecast 'cause whenever we plan to go then I don't want any messed up after going out and having the bad weather which will trouble me later on.

✓ So it's very important to check the weather forecast beforehand because whenever we plan to go out, I don't want any problems caused by bad weather that will trouble me later.

'Further weather forecast' is incorrect; 'weather forecast' suffices. 'Whenever we plan to go then' is awkward; 'whenever we plan to go out' is better. 'Any messed up' is incorrect; 'any problems' or 'any mess-ups' is better. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I choose to check the weather forecast before going everywhere.

✓ So I choose to check the weather forecast before going anywhere.

'Going everywhere' is incorrect in this context; 'going anywhere' is the correct phrase to indicate any place. 'Everywhere' implies all places, which is not intended here.

× So it's worldwide and we of course know it's all like global warming.

✓ So it's worldwide, and we, of course, know it's all about global warming.

The phrase 'it's all like global warming' is informal and unclear. Adding 'about' clarifies the meaning. Also, commas improve readability.

× It's affecting everything and the climate change we are suffering.

✓ It's affecting everything, and we are suffering from climate change.

The original sentence has awkward word order. 'The climate change we are suffering' is incorrect; it should be 'we are suffering from climate change.' Also, a comma separates the two independent clauses.

× Everyone in this whole world, including everyone, every animal, social beings, humans and everyone is affected by global warming.

✓ Everyone in the whole world, including animals, social beings, and humans, is affected by global warming.

The repetition of 'everyone' is redundant. 'Social beings' is vague but kept; commas are added for clarity. 'Is' agrees with the singular subject 'everyone.'

× I'm so sorry. I don't prefer to go anywhere except my, you know, like nearby weathers 'cause I'm not that friendly in other climates or other cities.

✓ I'm sorry, but I don't prefer to go anywhere except nearby places because I'm not comfortable in other climates or cities.

'Nearby weathers' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable and cannot be pluralized. 'Nearby places' or 'nearby areas' is correct. 'Not that friendly in other climates' is awkward; 'not comfortable in other climates' is better. Also, 'I'm so sorry' is simplified to 'I'm sorry' for formality.

× I prefer to have my own weather where I live and I know how it is.

✓ I prefer to have the weather I know where I live.

'My own weather' is unnatural; 'the weather I know' is better. The sentence is simplified for clarity and naturalness.