Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại thông tin và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời bổ sung liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I live in northern Vietnam, which experiences four distinct seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter. Among these, I find spring to be the most pleasant season because of its mild temperatures and blooming flowers.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác như 'I'm can adjust that'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer cold weather because it makes me feel refreshed. Although sometimes it can be a bit too cold, I can easily adjust. On the other hand, hot weather often makes me feel uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn còn thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ lặp lại và hoàn thành câu để ý nghĩa rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because the rainy season in Vietnam can be quite unpleasant. During that time, everything gets wet and it often affects my mood negatively.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và hoàn thành câu trả lời. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm realize'.

Ejemplo: I used to ignore the weather forecast, but now I realize its importance. I usually check it every morning to plan my activities. For example, if the forecast says it will be sunny tomorrow, I will definitely hang out with my friends.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn còn thiếu sự rõ ràng và hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

Ejemplo: Climate change is a serious issue that affects our lives. For example, in Vietnam, rising temperatures have caused glaciers to melt and sea levels to rise, leading to flooding in some areas.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi như 'they had' thay vì 'they have'.

Ejemplo: Absolutely. I live in Vietnam, where the weather is mostly hot. I have always dreamed of visiting European countries because they have cold winters and snow, which would be a new and exciting experience for me, even though it might be challenging.

× I live in Vietnam, which is a tropical weather, so we have Four Seasons clearly and I live in north of Vietnam.

✓ I live in Vietnam, which has tropical weather, so we have four seasons clearly and I live in the north of Vietnam.

The phrase 'a tropical weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take an indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'north of Vietnam' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the region. Additionally, 'which is a tropical weather' should be 'which has tropical weather' to correctly describe the climate.

× Yes, we have 4 main season which is spring, summer, autumn and winter and spring could be the best weather and sometimes.

✓ Yes, we have 4 main seasons which are spring, summer, autumn and winter, and spring could be the best season sometimes.

The word 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to multiple seasons. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'spring could be the best weather' is incorrect; it should be 'spring could be the best season' because 'weather' is uncountable and does not fit here.

× Cold make me feel, you know, refresh, although it can be little bit too cold, but I'm can adjust that.

✓ Cold makes me feel, you know, refreshed, although it can be a little bit too cold, but I can adjust to that.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'Cold'. 'Refresh' should be the past participle 'refreshed' to describe the feeling. 'I'm can' is incorrect; it should be 'I can'. Also, 'adjust that' should be 'adjust to that' because 'adjust' requires the preposition 'to'.

× In contrast, hot weather make me feel terrible.

✓ In contrast, hot weather makes me feel terrible.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'hot weather'.

× I prefer dry more and more than wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather more than wet weather.

The phrase 'dry more and more than wet weather' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'dry weather more than wet weather' to clearly express preference.

× In Vietnam we had a wet season, which is terrible.

✓ In Vietnam, we have a wet season, which is terrible.

The tense should be present 'have' instead of past 'had' because the wet season is a recurring event. Also, a comma is needed after 'Vietnam' for clarity.

× You know, the door, the floor, everything, just, you know, watery.

✓ You know, the door, the floor, everything is just, you know, wet.

The sentence lacks a proper verb and uses 'watery' incorrectly as an adjective for objects like door and floor. 'Wet' is the correct adjective here, and the verb 'is' is needed for sentence completeness.

× And it makes our moods down so much.

✓ And it brings our moods down so much.

The phrase 'makes our moods down' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'brings our moods down' to indicate a decrease in mood.

× but currently I'm realize the importance of weather forecast because I will base on the weather to decide my activities for the whole day.

✓ but currently I realize the importance of the weather forecast because I base my decisions on the weather for the whole day.

The phrase 'I'm realize' is incorrect; it should be 'I realize' in present simple tense. 'Will base on' is incorrect; 'base' is better in present simple here. Also, 'weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'base on the weather to decide' should be 'base my decisions on the weather' for clarity.

× For example, when I check tomorrow is a sunny day, I would definitely hanging out with my friends or.

✓ For example, when I check that tomorrow is a sunny day, I would definitely hang out with my friends.

The verb 'hanging' should be the base form 'hang' after 'would'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs 'that' after 'check' to introduce the clause.

× I think climate change has always been a hot topic and we all know about how important is it and how it affect our lives.

✓ I think climate change has always been a hot topic and we all know how important it is and how it affects our lives.

The phrase 'how important is it' should be 'how important it is' to maintain correct word order in indirect questions. 'How it affect' should be 'how it affects' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× For example in Vietnam due to the climate change the ice seem to melt and the water level is higher with.

✓ For example, in Vietnam, due to climate change, the ice seems to melt and the water level is rising.

The verb 'seem' should be 'seems' to agree with singular subject 'ice'. The phrase 'is higher with' is incomplete and awkward; 'is rising' is a better expression. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× Absolutely, I live in Vietnam which is currently 90% include hot weather and I always dream to go to some country in Europe because they had winter and especially they had snow in it, although it could be challenging.

✓ Absolutely, I live in Vietnam which currently has 90% hot weather and I always dream of going to some countries in Europe because they have winter and especially snow, although it could be challenging.

The phrase '90% include hot weather' is incorrect; it should be '90% hot weather'. 'Dream to go' should be 'dream of going'. 'Some country' should be plural 'some countries'. 'They had' should be 'they have' to match present tense. 'They had snow in it' is awkward; 'especially snow' is better.