Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start directly by answering the question, use correct verb forms, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: The weather where I live is generally moderate and changes according to the season. For example, in winter, temperatures usually stay around 7 to 8°C, but in summer, it can get very hot, sometimes rising up to 40°C.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and has incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly with complete sentences and use linking words to connect your reasons.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I don't like staying in the heat. Moreover, cold weather allows me to wear different and beautiful clothes, which positively affects my personality and helps me stay productive throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas clearly, use correct prepositions, and avoid vague phrases like 'spend my time'.

Ejemplo: On a daily basis, I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable. However, sometimes I enjoy wet weather as it gives me a good opportunity to spend quality time with my family and friends, which helps me take a break from work.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Avoid irrelevant information like 'To be an actor'. Also, use proper sentence structure and linking words to explain your habits clearly.

Ejemplo: I usually check the weather forecast before going outside, especially when I travel by bike, because I want to avoid getting caught in the rain. However, if I travel by car, I don't check the forecast as much.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear ideas. Try to express your opinion clearly, use correct verb forms, and provide specific examples to support your points.

Ejemplo: As far as I know, climate change has been influenced by advanced technology, which affects the seasons. For example, the rainy season now arrives earlier than before, which negatively impacts the environment.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid repeating the same ideas and use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

Ejemplo: I would like to visit cities with colder climates because I feel more comfortable in cold weather. Additionally, it allows me to wear different styles of fashionable clothes that reflect my personality, and I find that winter helps me stay productive throughout the day.

× The weather where I live is generally moderated and change according to season.

✓ The weather where I live is generally moderate and changes according to the season.

The adjective 'moderated' is incorrect here; 'moderate' is the correct adjective to describe weather. Also, the verb 'change' should be in the third person singular form 'changes' to agree with the singular subject 'weather'.

× I mean in the winter season it usually stay around 7 to 8° but if talk about the summer season it can get very hot.

✓ I mean in the winter season it usually stays around 7 to 8°, but if I talk about the summer season, it can get very hot.

The verb 'stay' should be 'stays' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to weather). Also, the phrase 'if talk about' is missing the subject 'I'. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× It's around and sometime rising up to 40°C.

✓ It's around that and sometimes rises up to 40°C.

The adverb 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The verb 'rising' should be 'rises' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, adding 'that' clarifies the sentence.

× On the other side, also have the option to wear different and beautiful dresses in cold season that effects on my personality and make me productive throughout the.

✓ On the other hand, I also have the option to wear different and beautiful dresses in the cold season, which affects my personality and makes me productive throughout the day.

The phrase 'On the other side' is incorrect; 'On the other hand' is the correct expression. The subject 'I' is missing before 'also have'. 'Cold season' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Effects on' should be 'affects' as a verb. The sentence was incomplete; 'throughout the' should be 'throughout the day'. Subject-verb agreement is corrected with 'makes'. Commas improve readability.

× Well, on my daily basis I prefer dry weather but on sometime when I want to spend my time then I prefer wet weather because it is a better opportunity to spend with time with the ladies and family members and I think it is the only way to take a break from the work.

✓ Well, on a daily basis, I prefer dry weather, but sometimes when I want to spend my time, I prefer wet weather because it is a better opportunity to spend time with the ladies and family members, and I think it is the only way to take a break from work.

The phrase 'on my daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. 'On sometime' is incorrect; 'sometimes' is correct. 'Spend with time with' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time with'. The article 'the' before 'work' is unnecessary here. Commas are added for clarity.

× To be an actor, I usually check the weather forecast.

✓ As an actor, I usually check the weather forecast.

The phrase 'To be an actor' is incorrect; 'As an actor' is the correct expression to indicate role or profession.

× Whenever I go outside I will check because I don't want to that in the rain.

✓ Whenever I go outside, I check because I don't want to be caught in the rain.

The phrase 'I will check' is better as 'I check' to indicate habitual action. The phrase 'I don't want to that in the rain' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I don't want to be caught in the rain'. Commas improve sentence clarity.

× That's why I check weather and it should depend on my situation.

✓ That's why I check the weather, and it depends on my situation.

The noun 'weather' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'it should depend' is better as 'it depends' to indicate current condition. Comma added before 'and' for clarity.

× When I travel with a bike, then I check the forecast weather in a car I have no problem.

✓ When I travel by bike, I check the weather forecast; in a car, I have no problem.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect; 'by bike' is correct. 'Forecast weather' should be 'weather forecast'. The sentence was run-on; splitting with a semicolon improves clarity.

× As far as I know the climate change are deeply affected due to the advanced technology and it's a factor on the seasonal.

✓ As far as I know, climate change is deeply affected due to advanced technology, and it's a factor in the seasons.

'Climate change' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. The phrase 'on the seasonal' is incorrect; 'in the seasons' is appropriate. Commas added for clarity.

× I mean the rainy season come very fastly, it's not on their prefect time like the past year.

✓ I mean the rainy season comes very fast; it's not at its perfect time like in past years.

The verb 'come' should be 'comes' to agree with singular subject 'rainy season'. The adverb 'fastly' is incorrect; 'fast' is correct. 'Their' should be 'its' referring to 'rainy season'. 'Prefect' is a typo for 'perfect'. 'Like the past year' is better as 'like in past years'. Semicolon added to separate clauses.

× I think it's impact in badly.

✓ I think it impacts badly.

The phrase 'it's impact in badly' is incorrect. 'It impacts badly' is correct; 'impact' is a verb here. The preposition 'in' is unnecessary.

× I'd like to say other cities where the weather is cold because I would like to stay in a cold weather because in cold weather I stay comfortable and I have the option to wearing different styles and fashionable clothes that reflect my personality and winter also make me a productive throughout my day.

✓ I'd like to visit other cities where the weather is cold because I feel comfortable in cold weather. I have the option to wear different styles and fashionable clothes that reflect my personality, and winter also makes me productive throughout my day.

The phrase 'I'd like to say other cities' is incorrect; 'I'd like to visit other cities' is correct. 'Stay in a cold weather' should be 'feel comfortable in cold weather'. 'Option to wearing' should be 'option to wear'. 'Winter also make me a productive' should be 'winter also makes me productive'. Commas added for clarity and sentence split for readability.