Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details using linking words.

Ejemplo: In August, the weather in Pakistan is usually warm, but since yesterday it has been raining heavily, making it feel like December. This sudden change is quite unusual for this time of year.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Focus on giving a clear opinion with supporting reasons, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer both cold and hot weather depending on my mood. For instance, I enjoy cold weather because it feels refreshing, but hot weather is good too as it makes my skin glow and feel hydrated.

Sugerencia: Your answer is mostly clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to explain your feelings better.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because it feels cozy, warm, and peaceful. On the other hand, wet weather makes me feel irritated and restless.

Sugerencia: Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid grammatical errors for better clarity.

Ejemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly. However, before going out, I sometimes check it to see if it will rain or be hot, depending on my plans.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and specific details. Use linking words and precise vocabulary to explain the causes and effects clearly.

Ejemplo: I believe climate change has many effects due to human activities. For example, increased use of cars, electricity, and air conditioners contributes to global warming and changes in weather patterns.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and more varied vocabulary to make it more coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy visiting different cities in Pakistan, such as Kashmir, Swat Valley, and Skardu. These mountainous areas have a different climate, which is very beneficial for both mental and physical health.

× It is the month of August in Pakistan and supposedly it should be like warmer, but from yesterday it is raining high heavily and it is feeling like December.

✓ It is the month of August in Pakistan and supposedly it should be warmer, but since yesterday it has been raining heavily and it feels like December.

The phrase 'raining high heavily' is incorrect; the correct form is 'raining heavily' because 'heavily' is an adverb modifying the verb 'raining'. Also, 'it is feeling like December' should be 'it feels like December' to use the simple present tense for general statements. The verb 'has been raining' is used to indicate an action continuing from the past until now.

× So yeah, it is a cold weather there here.

✓ So yeah, the weather here is cold.

The phrase 'a cold weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take an indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'there here' is contradictory; it should be 'here' to indicate the current location.

× Sometimes I like cold weather weather and sometimes I like hot weather like in it is a advantage of cold.

✓ Sometimes I like cold weather and sometimes I like hot weather; it is an advantage of cold weather.

The repetition 'cold weather weather' is a mistake. Also, 'a advantage' should be 'an advantage' because 'advantage' starts with a vowel sound. The sentence structure is unclear and needs punctuation to separate ideas.

× We hot weather to me is that in hot weather warm weather I feel like my skin glows and I feel hydrated and in cold.

✓ To me, the advantage of hot weather is that my skin glows and I feel hydrated, unlike in cold weather.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct word order. 'We hot weather to me is that' is incorrect; it should be 'To me, the advantage of hot weather is that'. Also, 'and in cold' is incomplete and should be 'unlike in cold weather'.

× I prefer dry weather because it is so cozy and warmer and peaceful than the wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is cozier, warmer, and more peaceful than wet weather.

The word 'cozy' should be in comparative form 'cozier' to compare dry and wet weather. Also, 'the wet weather' should be 'wet weather' without 'the' because we are talking about weather in general.

× Wet weather make me angry and I feel like I am going to be crazy.

✓ Wet weather makes me angry and I feel like I am going crazy.

The subject 'Wet weather' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. Also, 'going to be crazy' is better expressed as 'going crazy' for naturalness.

× Not really, but sometimes when I am about to go somewhere I feel like to check the weather if it is about to rain or if it will be hot so that it depends on my schedule.

✓ Not really, but sometimes when I am about to go somewhere, I feel like checking the weather to see if it is going to rain or if it will be hot; it depends on my schedule.

The phrase 'feel like to check' is incorrect; after 'feel like' we use the gerund form 'checking'. Also, 'if it is about to rain' is better as 'if it is going to rain'. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.

× I think like there are several effects of climate change because of our habits, because of 35 plus usage of more automations, automation, cars and more electricity, AC and these are things that are affecting our climate.

✓ I think there are several effects of climate change because of our habits, such as the increased use of automation, cars, electricity, and air conditioning; these things are affecting our climate.

The phrase '35 plus usage of more automations' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'increased use of automation'. Also, 'AC' should be expanded to 'air conditioning' for clarity. The sentence is restructured for better flow.

× Yes, I do like visiting different cities in my own country like Kashmir and Sawat Valley, Skardu, there are so many mountains there and it is so so good for your mental health and your physical health.

✓ Yes, I like visiting different cities in my own country, like Kashmir, Swat Valley, and Skardu. There are many mountains there, and it is very good for your mental and physical health.

The phrase 'like Kashmir and Sawat Valley, Skardu' needs commas to separate items properly. 'Sawat' is corrected to 'Swat'. The sentence is split for clarity and better structure. 'So so good' is informal and replaced with 'very good'.