Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to improve clarity and grammar by using correct sentence structures and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and ensure your answer is concise and natural. For example, use 'moderate weather' instead of 'moderate waiter' and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Ejemplo: The weather in my city is quite moderate. Summers can be hot, reaching up to 35°C, while winters are mild, dropping to around 5°C. Overall, I find the climate quite pleasant.

Sugerencia: Focus on improving fluency and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, be careful with singular/plural forms, e.g., 'warm clothes' instead of 'a warm clothes'.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer cold weather because it allows me to wear warm clothes, including my designer outfits, especially in winter. In contrast, wearing heavy clothes in summer makes me sweat, so I definitely like cold weather more.

Sugerencia: Work on pronunciation and clarity, and avoid filler words. Use correct vocabulary ('wet' instead of 'sweet') and structure your answer logically with linking words. Be concise and clear.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because clothes dry quickly. In wet weather, washing clothes takes longer to dry, which can be inconvenient.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and filler words. Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clear sentence structures. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'overall weather forecast second, give me'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I regularly check the weather forecast, especially before going out for classes or work. I think many people in my country do the same to plan their day.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use complete sentences and avoid incomplete thoughts. Provide specific examples or effects to support your answer.

Ejemplo: Climate change has had a huge impact on our country. In the past, the environment was cleaner with little air pollution. However, in recent years, air pollution has increased significantly, affecting people's health.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and unclear references. Use correct vocabulary and be specific about places. For example, 'Boko Haram' is a terrorist group, so mention a real city with a green environment instead.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates where I can enjoy fresh air and relax without worrying about pollution. For example, I would like to visit places with lots of greenery, such as Al Ain.

× Where I live in my cities almost the moderate waiter, not very cold and not very hot, but in summer it goes up to 35°C and in winter it goes down almost 5°C.

✓ Where I live in my city, the weather is almost moderate, not very cold and not very hot, but in summer it goes up to 35°C and in winter it goes down to almost 5°C.

The phrase 'in my cities' is incorrect because the speaker refers to a single location; 'in my city' is correct. Also, 'moderate waiter' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'moderate weather'. The preposition 'to' is missing after 'goes down'. Correct prepositions and singular/plural forms improve clarity.

× I usually prefer cold weather bit uh because it allows me to wear a warm clothes and I can wear my designer clothes in my especially in the winter.

✓ I usually prefer cold weather a bit because it allows me to wear warm clothes and I can wear my designer clothes, especially in the winter.

The phrase 'a warm clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'. Also, 'bit uh' should be 'a bit' for correct quantifier usage. Removing unnecessary words and correcting quantifiers makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× But in summer if I wear something heavy I will start to sweat.

✓ But in summer, if I wear something heavy, I will start to sweat.

Commas are needed after introductory phrases to improve sentence clarity. Although not a major grammar error, proper punctuation helps understanding.

× Well, to be honest, I prefer dry weather rather than the sweet weather because in wet weather, uh, if you wash your clothes and keep it for that, try, it will consume more time and dry weather, uh, I can wash my T-shirts, uh, and any other clothes and I keep it for the dry, it will dry so very soon.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because in wet weather, if you wash your clothes and keep them to dry, it will take more time. In dry weather, I can wash my T-shirts and any other clothes and keep them to dry; they will dry very quickly.

The phrase 'sweet weather' is incorrect; it should be 'wet weather'. The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used for plural 'clothes'; 'them' is correct. Also, 'keep it for that, try' is unclear and corrected to 'keep them to dry'. These corrections improve pronoun agreement and clarity.

× Yes, well, to be honest, I regularly check the weather forecast, umm, especially when I have to go outside for my classes, my work at that time.

✓ Yes, well, to be honest, I regularly check the weather forecast, especially when I have to go outside for my classes or my work at that time.

The phrase 'my classes, my work at that time' lacks conjunction; 'or' is needed to connect the two items properly. This is an incorrect conjunction use, improving sentence structure.

× I check my weather forecast and usually everybody in our country check the weather forecast, overall weather forecast second, give me.

✓ I check the weather forecast, and usually everybody in our country checks the overall weather forecast regularly.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'My weather forecast' is incorrect; it should be 'the weather forecast'. Subject-verb agreement is corrected ('everybody...checks'). The phrase 'overall weather forecast second, give me' is nonsensical and removed for clarity.

× Climate change have huge impact in our country.

✓ Climate change has a huge impact in our country.

'Climate change' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'huge impact' needs the article 'a' before it. Correct subject-verb agreement and article usage are essential for grammatical accuracy.

× If you see the past years it will is it used to be very cleanliness environment, no air pollution was there.

✓ If you look at the past years, it used to be a very clean environment; no air pollution was there.

The phrase 'see the past years' should be 'look at the past years' for correct preposition use. 'Cleanliness environment' is incorrect; 'clean environment' is correct. Also, 'it will is it used to be' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'it used to be'.

× But in the recent year there are huge air pollution, people are not.

✓ But in recent years, there has been huge air pollution, and people are not as careful.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'In the recent year' should be 'in recent years'. 'There are huge air pollution' is incorrect; 'there has been huge air pollution' is correct for singular uncountable noun. The phrase 'people are not' is incomplete and needs clarification.

× Yes, uh, definitely I would love to visit different cities, uh, where I can get the fresh air and I can relax there without, uh, worrying about the pollution.

✓ Yes, definitely, I would love to visit different cities where I can get fresh air and relax without worrying about pollution.

The phrase 'the fresh air' and 'the pollution' are incorrect here because they refer to general concepts, so the definite article 'the' should be omitted. Also, unnecessary filler words are removed for clarity.

× Additionally, I like the green place where I can enjoy my vacation, especially cities like Boko Haram.

✓ Additionally, I like green places where I can enjoy my vacation, especially cities like Boko Haram.

'The green place' is incorrect because the speaker refers to general places, so plural 'green places' without 'the' is appropriate. This correction improves adjective and article usage.