Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, đồng thời tránh lỗi sai về từ vựng và ngữ pháp như 'city experience for distant seasons' nên là 'the city experiences distinct seasons'.

Ejemplo: I live in Hanoi, which is in northern Vietnam. The city experiences four distinct seasons. For example, summers are hot and humid, with temperatures often rising above 35°C, while winters tend to be cold.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến cách sử dụng từ và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lặp từ như 'very very' và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it's heavy constraints better' không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I find it refreshing and peaceful. For example, I enjoy winter as it allows me to relax by watching cozy movies while drinking hot tea or wearing warm clothes. Also, I feel more comfortable in cold weather.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn còn thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it's allow me'. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Thêm liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I definitely prefer dry weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities like swimming and cycling without any interruptions.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, rõ ràng và có ví dụ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm một vài từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house. This helps me choose suitable clothes and plan my day better. For example, if it is going to rain, I make sure to bring an umbrella or wear a waterproof jacket.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời bằng cách sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cụ thể hơn, ví dụ như 'melting of glaciers and ice caps'. Đồng thời, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: In recent years, one of the most important effects of climate change is global warming. The Earth's overall temperature has been rising, leading to more extreme weather events like heat waves and storms. In addition, climate change has caused the melting of glaciers and ice caps.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, tự nhiên và có cấu trúc rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một vài từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. If I had the opportunity to visit a country with a different climate from Vietnam, I would love to experience new weather conditions and learn how people adapt to them. Moreover, it would be a great chance to broaden my horizons.

× the city experience for distant seasons throughout the year

✓ the city experiences four distinct seasons throughout the year

The subject 'city' is singular, so the verb should be 'experiences' (third person singular). Also, 'distant seasons' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'four distinct seasons' to describe the four different seasons clearly.

× while winter tend to be cold

✓ while winter tends to be cold

The subject 'winter' is singular, so the verb should be 'tends' to agree in number (third person singular).

× I find very very refreshing and peaceful

✓ I find it very refreshing and peaceful

The verb 'find' requires an object; 'it' is needed to refer to the weather or cold weather. Without 'it', the sentence is incomplete.

× by watching cozy movie during hot tea or wearing warm clothes

✓ by watching cozy movies while drinking hot tea or wearing warm clothes

The phrase 'during hot tea' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'while drinking hot tea'. Also, 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to be natural in this context.

× Additionally, it's heavy constraints better

✓ Additionally, it helps me feel better

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'It's heavy constraints better' does not make sense. A clearer sentence is 'it helps me feel better' to express the intended meaning.

× because it's allow me to to play, to do some outdoor activities such as swimming or riding, so

✓ because it allows me to play and do some outdoor activities such as swimming or riding

The modal verb 'allow' should be in third person singular form 'allows' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'to to' is a typo and should be 'to'. The sentence should be completed properly without 'so' at the end.

× climate change also caused melting

✓ climate change has also caused melting

The present perfect tense 'has caused' is appropriate here to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Using simple past 'caused' is less suitable in this context.