Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer provides relevant information but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage like 'WAVY'. Instead, use appropriate vocabulary such as 'windy' or 'breezy'. Also, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Ejemplo: I live in Mumbai, Maharashtra, which is on the western coast of India. The weather here is generally pleasant and breezy because of its proximity to the sea.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid awkward phrasing like 'where you find most festivals are being celebrated'. Try to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather, especially during the winter season. This is because many festivals take place then, and the mountains and landscapes become very beautiful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect sentences. Also, correct the phrase 'rainy season for almost 6 months' to 'rainy season lasts for almost six months'.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because Mumbai experiences a rainy season that lasts for almost six months, from August to December. During this time, it rains heavily, so I enjoy sunny days more.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding informal phrases like 'so that you know'. Also, try to use linking words and more formal expressions to sound natural.

Ejemplo: I don't usually check the weather forecast regularly. However, when I plan to travel abroad, I like to check it to stay informed about the expected weather conditions.

Sugerencia: Your answer is too brief and lacks specific details. Try to explain the effects more clearly and provide examples. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I believe climate change has led to increased pollution and higher vehicle emissions in recent years, which contribute to global warming and health problems.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains some errors and redundancy, such as 'very very' and incomplete description. Try to use precise vocabulary and complete your sentences for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For instance, during Mumbai's hot summer, I enjoy visiting northern India because the weather is cool and the air is very refreshing.

× The weather here is always pleasant and it is full of breezy and WAVY because it's nearby to the coastal area.

✓ The weather here is always pleasant and it is full of breezes and waves because it's near the coastal area.

The words 'breezy' and 'wavy' are adjectives, but the sentence requires nouns to describe what the weather is full of. Therefore, 'breezes' and 'waves' (plural nouns) are correct. Also, 'nearby to' is incorrect; 'near' is the correct preposition here.

× The weather here is always pleasant and it is full of breezy and WAVY because it's nearby to the coastal area.

✓ The weather here is always pleasant and it is full of breezes and waves because it's near the coastal area.

The phrase 'nearby to' is incorrect. 'Nearby' is an adjective or adverb and does not require 'to'. The correct preposition to use with 'near' is simply 'near' without 'to'.

× It's the time of the year where you find most festivals are being celebrated and as well the mountain and the landscape turns beautiful.

✓ It's the time of the year when most festivals are celebrated, and the mountains and landscape turn beautiful.

The phrase 'where you find most festivals are being celebrated' is awkward and incorrect. 'When' is the correct relative adverb for time. Also, 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' to agree with 'landscape', and 'turns' should be 'turn' to agree with the plural subject.

× It's the time of the year where you find most festivals are being celebrated and as well the mountain and the landscape turns beautiful.

✓ It's the time of the year when most festivals are celebrated, and the mountains and landscape turn beautiful.

The subject 'mountain and the landscape' is plural, so the verb should be 'turn' instead of 'turns'. Also, 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' to match the context.

× I prefer dry over wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather over wet weather.

The phrase 'prefer dry over wet weather' is incomplete. The correct form is 'prefer dry weather over wet weather' to clearly state the comparison.

× That means the rain is always pouring heavily during all the six months from August till December and I would love the sun.

✓ That means the rain always pours heavily during the six months from August till December, and I love the sun.

The phrase 'is always pouring' is present continuous, but for habitual actions, simple present tense 'always pours' is preferred. Also, 'would love the sun' is incorrect here; 'I love the sun' expresses a general preference.

× However, when I plan for traveling overseas, I like to check the weather forecast so that you know I'm updated with what I am going to face.

✓ However, when I plan to travel overseas, I like to check the weather forecast so that I know I'm updated about what I am going to face.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used; it should be 'I' to maintain the first-person perspective. Also, 'plan for traveling' should be 'plan to travel', and 'updated with' should be 'updated about'.

× I believe the effect of climate change in the recent year is the pollution and the use of vehicles.

✓ I believe the effects of climate change in recent years are pollution and the use of vehicles.

'Effect' should be plural 'effects' because multiple effects are implied. 'Recent year' should be plural 'recent years' to indicate a period. Also, the verb should be plural 'are' to agree with the plural subject.

× For example, during summer in Mumbai, I love to visit the northern part of the country because it's chilled and the weather is very very and the air is very refreshing.

✓ For example, during summer in Mumbai, I love to visit the northern part of the country because it's cool, the weather is very pleasant, and the air is very refreshing.

'Chilled' is incorrect as an adjective here; 'cool' is appropriate. The phrase 'the weather is very very' is incomplete and needs an adjective like 'pleasant' to complete the meaning.