Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I live in Hong Kong, where the weather has become hotter in recent years due to climate change.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence clarity and grammar by using correct verb forms and linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I am not comfortable in the heat. Having lived in Canada for five years, I enjoy snowy days more than hot ones.

Sugerencia: Use clearer sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence. Avoid repeating the same idea and try to be more concise.

Ejemplo: Since I prefer cold weather, I also like dry weather because it feels more refreshing and comfortable than wet weather. Living in Canada for a few years helped me appreciate dry climates, which suit my personality.

Sugerencia: Focus on grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward expressions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because it's important to know if there will be rain or snow. This helps me decide whether to bring an umbrella or drive carefully.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct verb forms and sentence structures. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be more specific in your suggestions.

Ejemplo: Climate change has worsened the weather and caused many ocean species to become extinct. Therefore, I believe the government should allocate more resources to sustainability initiatives to protect our environment.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence structure, grammar, and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more precise examples.

Ejemplo: In the future, I would like to visit Australia because its climate is different from Hong Kong's. For example, unique animals like the kangaroo can only be found there.

× The place I live in is in Hong Kong and the weather in here is pretty hot and it's because of the climate change in the recent year.

✓ The place I live in is Hong Kong and the weather here is pretty hot because of climate change in recent years.

The phrase 'the weather in here' is incorrect; 'here' alone suffices. Also, 'it's because of the climate change in the recent year' is awkward; 'because of climate change in recent years' is more natural. 'There is' is not explicitly used but the sentence structure needed adjustment to correct the use of 'in here' and article usage.

× That's why it has been hotter than the past few years.

✓ That's why it has been hotter than in the past few years.

The phrase 'than the past few years' is incomplete; it requires a preposition like 'in' to compare the current period with previous years properly.

× That's why I preferred in a snow day rather than a hot day.

✓ That's why I preferred a snowy day rather than a hot day.

The phrase 'preferred in a snow day' is incorrect; 'preferred a snowy day' is the correct form. Also, 'snow day' should be 'snowy day' to function as an adjective describing the day.

× As I mentioned that I'm a person prefers cold weather, I prefer dry weather as well, and I find it is more refreshing and comfortable than wet weather.

✓ As I mentioned, I'm a person who prefers cold weather; I prefer dry weather as well, and I find it more refreshing and comfortable than wet weather.

The phrase 'I'm a person prefers cold weather' lacks the relative pronoun 'who' to connect the clause properly. Also, 'I find it is more refreshing' is better as 'I find it more refreshing' for natural English.

× Yes, I personally would like to check the weather every day because I think it's very important to check is there any rain or snow outside of the environment.

✓ Yes, I personally like to check the weather every day because I think it's very important to check if there is any rain or snow outside.

The phrase 'check is there any rain or snow outside of the environment' is incorrect; it should be 'check if there is any rain or snow outside.' Also, 'would like to check' is better as 'like to check' for habitual action.

× And it also remains me to bring umbrella or driving with the car.

✓ And it also reminds me to bring an umbrella or to drive the car.

The verb 'remains' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'reminds.' Also, 'bring umbrella' needs the article 'an,' and 'driving with the car' should be 'to drive the car' for correct infinitive usage.

× Not only the weather is become more worse, but also the oceanic animal species are getting extinct.

✓ Not only is the weather becoming worse, but also oceanic animal species are becoming extinct.

The phrase 'is become more worse' is incorrect; it should be 'is becoming worse.' Also, 'getting extinct' is better expressed as 'becoming extinct.' The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity and correctness.

× And I think in my opinion, the government should provide more resources for the sustainability event to prove that it's very important for human to protect.

✓ And I think, in my opinion, the government should provide more resources for sustainability events to prove that it's very important for humans to protect the environment.

The phrase 'for the sustainability event' is incorrect; it should be 'for sustainability events.' Also, 'for human to protect' is incorrect; it should be 'for humans to protect the environment' for clarity and correctness.

× Over years I would like to visit Australia in the future as I noticed that there are different climate than Hong Kong, therefore are lots of special species.

✓ Over the years, I would like to visit Australia in the future as I have noticed that the climate is different from Hong Kong; therefore, there are lots of special species.

The phrase 'Over years' needs the definite article 'the.' 'Different climate than' should be 'climate is different from.' Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× For example Kerala kangaroo are only can be found in Australia and yes.

✓ For example, the kangaroo is only found in Australia.

'Kerala kangaroo' is incorrect; it should be 'the kangaroo.' Also, 'are only can be found' is incorrect; it should be 'is only found.' The sentence is simplified for clarity.